Webnovel Author: ken_wanderer

2mth

Posted

Well, folks, as the author of course I have to give it a solid 5 star. Do I believe it's a 5 star maybe? it sure has the potential. But my writing skills is not there yet and that's why I wish to implore upon y'all good and constructive criticism. So that I can make this into the masterpiece it deserves to be.

Varis: Scion of Darkness

Fantasy · ken_wanderer

ken_wanderer

11mth

Replied to Sandy_36

oh god my worst enemy then; studying for the sat, I have started to nitpick even the tiniest details and if it doesn't sit right with me I get absolutely furious and triggered.

Villain: With God-tier Choices, I Suppressed The Protagonist

Urban · Final Fantasy

ken_wanderer

2yr

Replied to KiIIuaZoldyck

You're clearly insinuating that a living condition could be racist is what I mean.

The world here was similar to the medieval times of the Europa continent in his previous life, where feudalism and slavery coexisted.

Breeding Dragons From Today

Fantasy · Fish For Every Year

ken_wanderer

3yr

Posted

Although, I am not caught up with the latest chapter I really love how this story is developing but a huge disappointment is the writing quality. Note that i am in the beginning chapters and i am presuming that the quality will get better and I really hope it does. This might just be me nitpicking but great story

Sacrifice: Time of Mine

Fantasy · JhiThan_Ser

ken_wanderer

3yr

Replied to Vitocorleone

Just my theory, but this residual energy and whatnot already exists in the brain, it's just that it shows when a person is dead. So, I'm guessing that by using aether he can train this energy without "dying".

[In dying, there is a residual trace of electrical or quantum activity in your brain. If nothing is done to conserve it, it will eventually disperse for lack of energy. However, if this proto-soul could use the Dream Aether for sustenance, it would have a chance to survive and grow stronger.]

The Oracle Paths

Sci-fi · Arkinslize

ken_wanderer

3yr

Posted

Honestly, quite good but the main problem with this story ,to me at least, is the large amout of unneeded info around the 400 mark but overall I really enjoyed this and I'd recommend this to be read

Astral Pet Store

Eastern · Ancient Xi

ken_wanderer

3yr

Commented

I have a feeling he'll still be clueless if he ever meets feifei and he'll undress in front of her just cuz she's his "wife" or something if yk what i mean