oh my goodness!!! the plot twists of this story is soooo good
ch 58 Unknown Origin
Fantasy · sola_cola
oh my honey bunny. be like Tilly. don't back down.. still hanging to every word of this novel....
ch 43 Back to Work
Fantasy · sola_cola
omy!!!! you keep making me smile you chapters you!!!!
ch 27 Advice from a Fire Wielder
Fantasy · sola_cola
yay!!! a smart fl at last!!!! sooooo happy!!!!
ch 24 The Clash
Fantasy · sola_cola
why am i smiling???☺️☺️☺️ missing my "baby" now...,😘
ch 21 Endearment
Fantasy · sola_cola
why am i smiling???☺️☺️☺️ missing my "baby" now...,😘
ch 21 Endearment
Fantasy · sola_cola
still loving the story here... please don't change for worse...
ch 14 Mini Family
Fantasy · sola_cola
still loving the chapter!!!! thank you!
ch 11 Public Display of Affection
Fantasy · sola_cola
liking the story still. adding to library...👍👍👍
ch 0 9 Odd Couple
Fantasy · sola_cola
my heart! so good reading a not one night stand novel!❤️❤️❤️ hooray for getting to know each other first
ch 0 6 One More Time
Fantasy · sola_cola
if this doesn't jolt fl that she is no longer following the plot, I don't know what will.
ch 48 Reason #25: it would be the beginning to my doom (7) C
Fantasy · MsAugustineFalls
i am no longer reading word for word. too many unnecessary characters deviating from the story. please focus on your plot. i understand you are still new and u can still improve. u started brilliantly but you got lost along the way. again it is not about making money (if you are a newbie). it is about establishing your quality. money will come if fans choose you
ch 47 Reason #25: it would be the beginning to my doom (7) B
Fantasy · MsAugustineFalls
this is the reason why I like Yunipher villainess. she's lovable, strong, knows what she wants and smart. i hate smart fl's but stupid when it comes to love. i hope in the next chapters Ivy will get better.
ch 37 Reason #23: it feels like a trap
Fantasy · MsAugustineFalls
way too extreme! no need to use violence to get the girl. tsk tsk
ch 15 Reason #13: I just want peace
Fantasy · MsAugustineFalls
daddy's little girl!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ better and better detail, dearest author,,👍👍👍
ch 0 5 Reason #5: I don’t want to be a damsel in distress
Fantasy · MsAugustineFalls
i do like the alternating POV! unlike other novels where chapters will pass before we learn what the other person thinks. kudos for doing this!❤️
ch 0 4 Reason #4: I support the 2nd male lead
Fantasy · MsAugustineFalls
the order of the stort is jumbled. i couldn't enjoy the erotica because of the disconnection. please edit first. will come back later. start from: -after 5 years from running away -meeting grandfather -knowing the engagement was never cancelled -reconnection of Ml and villainess -smut
ch 23 A Genius *
The ML and his Villianess.
Urban · YawningBrain