Badges 11
Moments 4
1yr
Commented i like the story line but you seriously need a good editor to do major sentence restructuring: grammars editing and proper vocabulary use in the sentence. Kudos to the author for trying though. Once this story goes thru proper editing, it would be a great read.
ch 27 First Meet(1)
His Witch Queen
Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
2yr
Commented See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Political Marriage
A Contract with Vampire
Urban · xandrinha
2yr
Commented See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Political Marriage
A Contract with Vampire
Urban · xandrinha
Can't even finish read the 1st chapter. Badly need an editor to improve choices of words use in writing and in constructing the sentences to make it more comprehensible.
ch 0 1 Scene I — Prologue.
Barbaric Spouse, Descry the Night's Lure
Fantasy · XimenoideX