For me I like this more than just reading him steam roll through his progress. It’s detached enough that it doesn’t just feel like lore dumping.
ch 17 A historian's point of view I
Book&Literature · Vincent_0580
Where are yours? Still wait for an update for your pokemon fanfics
Welcome back! Please continue there isn’t enought cyberpunk fics to cope.
ch 0 5 CHAPTER 5
Video Games · bhparsons19
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1) We blitz through the academy arc, 10-12 chapters max
Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_
Not saying I didn’t like the original but thanks for coming back!!
ch 0 2 [2] Reality Check
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
I like this so much more than the original. It feels more impactful.
ch 0 2 [2] Reality Check
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
Ironic that your name is Swordbringer but you took his sword away.
ch 10 Chapter 10: Loss
TV · Swordbringer
I don’t really see how it’s a nerf fully I mean he has the skill to beat almost anyone in time. A good sword is just a good sword dude can just take it back or get a new one like a good little murderhobo.
ch 10 Chapter 10: Loss
TV · Swordbringer
Woooooo
ch 55 Last day, Mining, and Hope.
Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
I was assuming you had reached that point from talking about it in the voting post, but either way I’ll be here lurking.
ch 55 I was asked to give a heads up, so here it is! (Not a chapter)
Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
Are you taking a break from this for the other story or what’s gunna happen. These constant not a chapters are playing with my heart.
ch 55 I was asked to give a heads up, so here it is! (Not a chapter)
Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
Even looking it over I still left grammar mistakes only realizing after posting. Joy.
ch 54 It's not a chapter, but rather a note! (Regarding the story - I'M NOT DROPPING IT!)
Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
I feel like changing your writing style for him based on others opinions would ruin your enjoyment of the story, he is your character how you write him is up to you. Personally it just seems like you sprinkle it in not at all overbearing. To many stories have the MC become some unfeeling machine written entirely to fast paced ruining good ideas to churn out more chapters. This story seems more like a regulars novels character development compared to a fanfic. Keep up the great work 10/10.
ch 54 It's not a chapter, but rather a note! (Regarding the story - I'M NOT DROPPING IT!)
Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
+1
A Tensura Elf in Danmachi
Anime & Comics · SleepySailor