You’re portraying her as a stupid character, firstly she cares a lot about her father and finally found someone who can save him yet she has issues with her father being naked for medical reason which is very common. She is a rank 2 magus I would expect her to be not this stupid. Previously you mentioned her aura hinting she has experience with killings and such then this stupidness makes no sense Secondly her analysis, she’s asking Adam why would he willingly consume poison and if he is out of his mind. She can’t even process simple logic? Your character is very inconsistent, feels like just a filler to add value to Adam and write some bs nonsense, very typical Chinese level quality and you wonder why your readers count is reducing. Your readers are not stupid, some expect quality
ch 438 Darkroot
Fantasy · Esenel
she is making everything about her, lol
"Thank you, guys." Kamila gave them both a hug, dragging Lith and Solus into a family embrace. "Thank you for acting like everything is normal. Thank you for being silly and making me forget about my issues.
Fantasy · Legion20
This doesn't make sense. she can make potions, forgemaster.. she can basically remember everything yet can't follow recipe and amount of ingredients that's needed? more bs from author. at least make it convincing
Solus Elphyn Althena Menadion-Verhen, genius Forgemaster and candidate Ruler of the Flames, despite countless attempts and hours spent in the kitchen with Elina, could still barely prepare a broth.
Fantasy · Legion20
He is obviously doing it for his daughter, to help her merge her cores
ch 2710 Everything Burns (Part 2)
Fantasy · Legion20
seems very out of character to me, she is not family, shes not from dessert, she doesn't matter to her yet she requested tezka to let her watch and even asking her family to help her in this situation.
"Surtr! Deal with the kid. I don't care what happens to me, Friya mustn't miss a single second of this fight. Did I make myself clear?" Salaark ordered.
Fantasy · Legion20
Since when she started to care so much about friya?
"Surtr! Deal with the kid. I don't care what happens to me, Friya mustn't miss a single second of this fight. Did I make myself clear?" Salaark ordered.
Fantasy · Legion20
there was science on morgar?
"Science, little sparrow." Tezka weaved his index finger in front of his snout without ever stopping his attacks. "Gravity is actually the curvature of space and time. You, I, and everyone else on Mogar are simply moving on the curvature of that fabric.
Fantasy · Legion20
too dramatic, lith will share it with everyone later anyways
ch 2702 A Warrior’s Spirit (Part 2)
Fantasy · Legion20
Don't think he will go
ch 12 Chapter: 402 A Bloodless Exchange
Fantasy · RudeusGreyrat_01
I hope Nico doesn't turn out to be a good guy now after recovering his unaltered memories and Arthur forgiving him.
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Lith is back being a kingdom's dog with or without leash. Whats the point of being a "major"/part of army? They sending him out on front alone. He could've participated as a mercenary and coordinated with army without being part of them cuz of deal with royal. He isn't working with army anyways, they're making him dance to their tune as always. Sad character development, mc is like Japanese beta male now
ch 2020 Triple Threat (Part 2)
Fantasy · Legion20
Did you even read recent chapters? He used destruction infused with Regis to fight wraiths. It wasn't enough, so he used destruction without Regis to win fight. And spear is from taci which he gifted to the Lance While art was having adventures at agnoras place, lances were fighting a war obviously they will have some growth. They're using everything they have just to buy few seconds, they're nowhere close to scythe level. It was stressed how scythes are toying with them and not taking it seriously too
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Lame drama as always. Lith is risking himself so she wants to risk herself too cuz logic
ch 2016 Switching Roles (Part 2)
Fantasy · Legion20
Again you’re portraying her as a dumb character, a rank 2 magus who needs analytical skills to form spell model and calm mind to be where she’s at, yet she is asking if Adam is accusing her family instead of reaching such conclusions herself. As expected from low quality Chinese clone novel
ch 439 Communication
Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe
Fantasy · Esenel