YEAA! know you're busy but keep this going aswell!
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Teen · Cosmic_nerd
okeyy, I'll be looking forward to see how you pull it off
ch 0 2 WRATH OF XERXES PART : 2
Fantasy · F_R_A
Hmmm.. I feel like someone who was just a regular highschool girl before this all happened would've long caved in to get the pearl removed or atleast when threatened with her family that can't defend itself. Feel like actual spies would spill everything from less torture tbh
ch 0 2 WRATH OF XERXES PART : 2
Fantasy · F_R_A
ouch!
We started to fight I used all my might to defend myself but she was so strong and she used her sword like a professional she swung her sword so fast that it became really difficult to doge and defend myself I fought smoothly but then suddenly someone from behind hit me with a dart rope ( a long rope with a blade on its one end ) it went straight into my left arm and I fell down with a scream .
Fantasy · F_R_A
V much a fun read, cosmic! Love the world building you have so far. There were some scenes with matt and xerxes that I thought might get corny but you made it work somehow without getting to that point
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Teen · Cosmic_nerd
Gendo Ikari had me ded
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Teen · Cosmic_nerd
Ahaha
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Teen · Cosmic_nerd
Ha, I doubt they're gonna think you're a disgrace regardless of which branch of chemistry you go into. (Unless it's the breaking bad route) and for sure, I'd be glad to share the progress of my novel once I've fleshed it out abit more and start publishing it. I still spend most of my free hours on animation, so it'll be p slow progress. Good thing is, I know how it ends. which is a helpful guiding factor to speed things up.
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Fantasy · Cosmic_nerd
Haha, sounds sassy. I'll check it out! Also Bio majorrr!.. sounds like alot of sleepless nights and cramming to me. Goodluck! . As for me, I'm a digital 2d Animator and Artist. I've basically self-learnt everything so I don't really have any connections in the community but I'm gonna start job hunting p soon here in Islamabad. I've always loved telling stories and was actually planning on becoming a writer before I discovered Animation and found out I could literally throw people into my world detail for detail how I imagined it. haha. Recently tho! I found an old draft of mine for a Webnovel and realised I had never stopped brainstorming that story, so decided to start writing again and am working on a Webnovel of my own on the side rn, tho it's all still in the drafting stage.
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Fantasy · Cosmic_nerd
(tell me about it, I've always hoped for a desi Webnovel community to blossom but it never happened.) Also.. YOU HAVE OTHER WORK? Is it published yet? or did you mean like.. the other kind of work. haha. and ofc good luck with your studies! Are you a english or lit major?
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Fantasy · Cosmic_nerd
Heyooo! Azadi Mubarak! You liked my comment so i came to check out your stuff. Only to be pleasantly surprised by the amount of polish you've put in your work. Only a prologue so I cant't really say too much, but I think your're on the right track to success. Hopefully what you're doing right now is getting a backlog together so that once you start formally publishing chapters, you can stay ahead while still keeping a good schedule. If you're not, that's totally fine too, just get the ball moving. Can't wait to see where you take this
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Fantasy · Cosmic_nerd
haha yea i noticed it was a new account, seeing you read your first webnovel and instantly start writing your own made me realise how I've just been making artificial barriers for myself when iwish to write a novelThanks for unknowingly inspiring me, looking forward to see how you bring your ideas to fruition!
ch 0 2 TRAINING FINAL PART :
Fantasy · F_R_A
Really Nice, you have layed down some good seeds that could later turn into your base for creating conflicts and resolution. My favourite one of which would be the op magical medicine. If something ever happened to someone she knows irl, it'sdbe interesting to see how her efforts to save them will effect her relationships, whether it's that she gets rejected to use it on mortals, or she uses it but it doesn't work and she needs to realise she can't save everybody. our she does save them, but they end up finding out her secret in the process. Endless possibilities whichever way you wish to take it. Both your story and style are unique so I'm sure soon enough, when you've built up a good amount of chapters more and more people will start to check it out.Keep writing!
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Fantasy · F_R_A
Haha, I didn't expect the dialogue to suddenly shift into a Muqalma type format this chapter. I do like it though, never seen this before in a Webnovel. Lets's keep it goin!
ch 0 2 THE GUARDIAN OF THE PEARLS
Fantasy · F_R_A
A good read altogether. Quality writing as always!
ch 0 4 CHAPTER 3
The Judgement of Shadows
Fantasy · Cosmic_nerd