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It's not the worst one that I've read but it could use some warnings like heavy AU or off the rails plotline. Or something like condensed plot. As the Harry Potter world had it's story merged down to a month or less of what should've had at least 6-8 months worth of content. Which could've kept the same with time skips. Or by not 100%ing the side missions. Feels kinda bad when authors break plot lines in order to complete all their side quests they make for the points they'll end up using to make stuff overpowered.

The story is a rather nice touch with some refreshing ideas on the Oshi no Ko anime. The only downside to this story is that it tries to come off as a spy x family story but it's more like a John Wick story with its marker like assassination the same thing John Wick had to complete to quit being an assassin in the first place. This doesn't make it bad but I'd hope there's either more spy x family references or just making a new title and remove said references that don't involve the story.

Tsunade would never go along with anything in the story, and would quite literally destroy the main character and everyone who would tried. So outside it being unbelievable it's just forced plot with fake personalities. I'd suggest adding a Heavy AU NTR tag since it's about as believable as a cow on the moon without being in any type of oxygen enclosure

While it could worse, the fact Bella is the love interest borderlines ntr given their weird destined partner bull, and the fact the character seems like a flimsy piece of paper despite being the equivalent of a racecar vs a snail.

Its definitely something I like but wish there'd be more of. Nier novels seem rarer if it has a story with it. Definitely keep up the good work, but I just hope you keep updating.

This has been a great story except for the major plot hole next to the fact he can flirt with everyone and even elves who disdain said stuff typically. With how the stats were for each level up by the time he became level 3 he'd be stronger then most level 10s if you take the average stats of each top tier adventurer when leveling. The stats should've capped at 1500 as most people forget the falna is based on the basis of a average level that you're at which is why bell could skip through levels despite taking it easy since his actions were judged against the average of his level.

Gotta say while the quality isn't bad along with the world background, some things just feel meh. While it could've been better given it's a hentai fic it's not inherently bad except for the prologue.

Honestly the first chapter was pretty cool, it could've been a nice build up with him as a crow trolling and messing around for at least 10 chapters and slowly evolving but it went full deep end of the "I got a overpowered mom and I slaughter anyone and anything and then transform all the avengers into my toys." In the end this novel went from a nice idea to a beyond God level power trip.

Honestly it's okay, story idea more unique then simple gamer. Accesses some more unique worlds. While people seem to gripe about romance it seems they don't realize people in life do way crazier after knowing each other for a day. A man in a stressful situation trying to survive finds basically such a nice woman and clicks with her it's at least way more reasonable than most romances on the platform. I would love to see more non popular worlds instead of just going to main stream worlds for missions.