Thebrownhulk

1yr

Commented

+1

Yes

Reborn In Chicago Fire

TV · HiTherefic

Thebrownhulk

2yr

Posted

I like the start not overly detailed. No problem reading. It looks promising I hope to see me chapters.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😤

In another world with wolverine's powers (Dropped)

Anime & Comics · Nine_Rey2007

Thebrownhulk

2yr

Commented

legen wait for it dary

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In Black Clover With Anti Magic System

Anime & Comics · HSR_writes

Thebrownhulk

2yr

Commented

Cliffhangers make me violent😑😡💥

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Reincarnated into twilight unknowingly.

Movies · Uchiha_Lover21

Thebrownhulk

2yr

Commented

+1

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Twilight reborn as a Dhamphir.

Movies · Uchiha_Lover21

Thebrownhulk

2yr

Commented

Gone in 60seconds?

"Ok what car to take to school for my first day?" As I finish that sentence I spot the only car I've every wanted, even in my past life. A beautiful grey 67' Shelby GT 500, that's right. "Hello Elenore, you're looking awfully sexy today." As I slowly walk and slide my hand across the side from the bumper to the door handle and hop in. Turning the key in the ignition, the roaring engine makes me feel at home behind this wheel. I notice there are racing gauges on the dash as well. "Oh yea I need to see how fast you can go baby." 'But not now, just need to get to school.'

My Own Lucifer In The Multiverse

Movies · mrblood388

Thebrownhulk

2yr

Posted

I'm ready for more chapters keep up the good work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

A Blazing Fist (Gamer Insert - Starting in Avatar The Last Airbender)

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

Thebrownhulk

2yr

Posted

Please don't drop this I really love this book. I hope to see more pages in the future. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😤🔥

The Dystopian World of Blue Wall

Fantasy · JamesLabel

Thebrownhulk

3yr

Posted

I like they way the story is going so far but the main thing is the grammar needs a lot of work.The second isn't as serious is the character design. I feel you could give him a little more depth but I think you could leave him as is and it would still be a good story.😌👍🏻