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Well, there's 2 options for that. One, the authors are sick perverts, or two, the author's just have no idea what children are like. They're never around them and never associate with them, so instead of trying to do some research and figure out how little kids would really behave, they just choose to treat them like miniadults.
Silas smiled at her, unaware of his good looks and popularity with girls his age. Although Nymira didn't have a crush on him, many parents could tell their daughters did.
Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality
Fantasy · Animosity
When he was explaining about how he got the light element he blatantly lied. He says, "When I awakened my mana core, I automatically gained an affinity to the light element." He didn't gain an affinity to the light element until after he received his second blessing, long after he awakened his mana core. the "When" would have to be changed to "After" to make that sentence not technically be a lie.
"I thought so too... But he hadn't lied once this entire time." Lochras had a permanent scowl on his face as he put his hand in his pocket and took out a stone with one large rune on it.
Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality
Fantasy · Animosity
While that may be the case, what about this situation or anything that has occurred would lead him to think that? Nothing...
'So Syra doesn't think I can beat her. It's understandable. My magic is the only thing that tips the scales in my favor.'
Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality
Fantasy · Animosity
The American Psychological Association as well as many other organizations throughout the world classify autism as a disorder. I kind of think you need to do more research yourself before you start criticizing others. You are also only referencing one class of autistic individuals. Autism is kind of a BS diagnoses. It covers too much, that's why it's referred to as autism spectrum disorder. Some individuals are as you say, and just think a little differently and also have higher functionality on certain things like math or languages, etc. Some are barely functional and do not have any higher skills though. There are people everywhere in between.
Her personal tutor once told of a disorder called autism. After that, she kind of assumed that her brother had it.
Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality
Fantasy · Animosity
However, extreme training like this did the trick. His muscles would repair right after due to his natural healing, and not only would they recover stronger than ever, but after his evolution blessing took effect, something else began to happen simultaneously.
Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality
Fantasy · Animosity
This really makes no sense at all. a 4 year old barely has the coordination to run without falling over. Let alone wield a sword.
Sure, they were surprised at how bad he was initially, especially for someone his age. It looked like he couldn't even pick the sword up, and when he did, he always stumbled on his own feet.
Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality
Fantasy · Animosity
It means something. It's not a very good metric for intelligence, but it is guaranteed that a person with a high iq will be rather intelligent. It is biased, and can't be fully trusted.
While his intelligence was nothing to scoff at, his IQ didn't compare to that of great scientists like Einstein and Newton. However, it wasn't his intelligence that built his ladder to the top, but his insatiable hunger for knowledge.
Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality
Fantasy · Animosity
Well Daphne went to the bottom of the trash pile for saying something as stupid as that...
"It's enough… Please don't be like my father."
HP: The Arcane Thief
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
No way no how what was written here would happen.
Axel shrugged. "All these people, they've all got a lot of aggression inside them. They just hold it back because of the rules. But when they catch a criminal, especially a thief… it's like they're given a license. They stop thinking of you as a person and just unleash their aggression," he explained. "Their conscience is clear, since the thief clearly "deserves it"," he said, looking at himself getting beaten to a pulp. There was hidden bitterness in his voice that Daphne was able to discern.
HP: The Arcane Thief
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
No, I'm afraid that you just fail to read through the author's incorrect word usage/typos. The last part of that sentence is "leading to it bursting out, THE sun would implode, not SPLIT." "Then" is actually "the" and "sit" is "split."
The professor shook his head and said, "Aura is compressible. Even if aura was compressed, leading to it bursting out, then Sun would implode, not sit."
Divine Path System
Fantasy · _Transcendent
I don't know what he's doing in this story, but it was pretty well established that he was hunting horcruxes in the original.
"And where the fuck is Dumbledore?!" She exclaimed in frustration. The school had been attacked and the Headmaster was still absent.
HP: The Arcane Thief
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
This kind of seems like you're making the hand being cut off too big of a deal. We presently have the capability of reattaching a limb if it is cut off. The cleaner the cut the more successful it is. I know this is an alternate HP world, but they were able to completely regrow the removed bones in Harry's arm from scratch in the original one. Reattaching a severed limb seems like something even the worst of magical medical practitioners could do easily.
The place was abuzz with activity right now. The best Healers from all over the world had been gathered on Minister Black's summons, just to attach a single hand.
HP: The Arcane Thief
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
So did my eyes just skim over the part where he tested his spirit strands to prove he had more than double Celine's? I don't remember that happening and if it happens now it would just be contrived BS if he had more than her because until he figures out how to break his limits he should be stuck at 50. There's no possible way that Celine didn't improve her strands by more than 4 over the course of the school year and summer break.
ch 363 New Academic Year
Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy
Fantasy · xlntz
Well, the brain stem has it's own neurons, I honestly couldn't say how many. The entire brain reportedly has billions of neurons. It controls most of the autonomous functions of the body. If 100 cells in your brain stem were upgraded or even destroyed it would pretty much have no effect on your body at all though. It pretty much doesn't make sense, but I guess we can just chalk it up to 4th dimensional nonsense that we can't comprehend with our 3rd dimensional minds.
The calculations running through Leonel's mind were astronomical. Just how many other neurons did 100 brain stem cells connect to? How many spinal connections? How many smooth muscle connections? How many organs did they control?
Dimensional Descent
Fantasy · Awespec
I don't see a translator listed, so I'm assuming the author is self-translating or writing in English. Whatever the case may be you need to stop using the word "exploding." It does not mean what you think it means and makes no sense in the way it is continuously used.
ch 37 Chapter 37 A Generous Reward
Global Killing: I Could Plunder Talent
Fantasy · Xuanting_Official
Nope, your counter of using it's English equivalent even further cements that you're wrong as the two words are not the same, grammatically speaking. I already gave you the actual textbook answer on why you were wrong, but clearly you won't take my word on it. So don't. Google Purdue OWL(online writing lab). It is one of the best online sources for any writing and grammar questions anyone could possibly have concerning the English language.
My Runes Can Be Upgraded
Games · Angry Laugh