we can compromise on two lol, the show dont tell is fine its valid criticism
Alaric's Father, Gunnar, wasn't great with talking, and really only let out his emotions on small occasions. He was a spearman on the hunting team, so their family had one of the bigger houses in the village.
Fantasy · Reawakening
I read because reading is fun and to be enjoyed, immersion is great, having fun reading a bad novel(not this one its fine ) is also fun, but pointing out flaws doesnt have to mean being disrespectful, and before you even try to say it wasnt you have Three comments to prove it
Alaric's Father, Gunnar, wasn't great with talking, and really only let out his emotions on small occasions. He was a spearman on the hunting team, so their family had one of the bigger houses in the village.
Fantasy · Reawakening
i normally don't reply to dumb comments but seriously dude? at the very least if your gonna complain do it in one comment
Alaric's Father, Gunnar, wasn't great with talking, and really only let out his emotions on small occasions. He was a spearman on the hunting team, so their family had one of the bigger houses in the village.
Fantasy · Reawakening
considering he only has 1 talent mark 2 scenarios are happening either they take longer to make new ones each time(unlikely if the first couples days mean anything), or he hass been and its simply unlikely he will find anyone better, or I guess he has a max of 1 talent mark at a time, but he would jave quickly moved into the other two scenarios if that was the case
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Fantasy · Mr_Palados
like he said easy prey
"Crack!" sound of cracking wood came from his right sight. Luckily for him, it was in the opposite direction of the wind. He sniffed and his dragon mouth opened in a terrifying grin, 'It's a herbivore, that means easy prey.'. For some reason, he could easily distinguish between different smells even though he had never before smelt them.
Fantasy · AnonymUser
that is the best changing of the quote i have ever seen
'Is this limit of my imagination?'
Fantasy · AnonymUser
that cake tho
It turned out that the Grand Moon Sect's Nascent Soul Grandmaster was celebrating his thousand-year-old birthday.
Eastern · Little Brother Langya
shinra tensei!
"Vaccum," a voice emanates in the heart of the sea of fur.
Fantasy · Katran5665
it doesnt apply to me because i say so lol
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Fantasy · Nzr150cc
thats nice of the system
'So, I think I have everything sorted out now. When I tried to possess Irene's dead body a small portion of her soul that was still here because she died with a powerful regret. This piece of her soul latched onto mine and forced me to stay in her body even though it was too damaged for me to normally possess. To fix this conundrum the system gave me the lesser regeneration skill to heal the damage and I am now stuck in this body and can't move until it finishes repairing the nerve damage.'
Fantasy · MegaC
this reminds me alot of rimworld and thats prettu cool
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Games · Gaasuja
ugh the question i myself have trouble answering
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Sci-fi · 1King_Rep1
The Goblin Elder's pupils constricted. Its instincts told it that there was something wrong with these two people.
Fantasy · Ultimate Guaiguaipi
important things need to be said twice
"Don't let her fall into the hands of others!"
Fantasy · Ultimate Guaiguaipi
stonks
He exchanged 10 points of energy for 1 point of energy.
Fantasy · Ultimate Guaiguaipi
this mans going full cell here
With a wave of his hand, the nearby bluestone slabs were shattered and reshaped in the air, then transformed into neat tiles.
Eastern · Abundance Every Year
I was just about to say that lol
Lying on the rattan chair, Jiang Yun drifted into a deep sleep.
Eastern · Abundance Every Year
I think that might be a bit of a stretch but I can see where your coming from
Ninjutsu: (1) The Control of Five Senses, (2) Transformation Jutsu, (3) Clone Jutsu.
Anime & Comics · Levaa
Your fine not many people are actually gonna get angry from some comments online lol, regardless have a good day
Alaric's Father, Gunnar, wasn't great with talking, and really only let out his emotions on small occasions. He was a spearman on the hunting team, so their family had one of the bigger houses in the village.
The Slime Sovereign
Fantasy · Reawakening