Webnovel Author: GentleFlame27 - Novel Collection

I know my grammar is not good since I'm not an English native and I was always lazy not good at English essay writing haha but i will always try to perfect my English Anyway thanks for the honest review

Thanz for your thoughts

The writing quality is very good, Story and plot also are good and the details are also good Well the world background is lacking too much, the story is rushing too much But its just opinion maybe the author have a good plan in the future

This book is decent, The grammatical errors look non-existent and the story is starting at a good pace, The starring is quite mysterious, U think The reader who likes to read some mystery and gaming novel they would love this novel However, there are fewer details about the surroundings and characters

The story is really and the writing also is very decent, sci-fi and romance i am not really a fan of these genre but this novel is quite good to read

Yes i will continue reading it

I have already downloaded a spell-checking app and as for an editor I cannot afford one, and in my place here, no one like a novel so I have no one to talk about this novel, Please just comment on the mistakes in a paragraph in chapter 1 and I will try to understand them

At first, I thought it was a normal story and when I saw that she teleport with a bunny I thought, it was some Alice in wonderland story huh... but what horror after on 2 chapters its really a good twist The writing is really smooth, I had already added it to library and I will read it when I have time,

A good story the plot is interesting, the writing quality is also good but needs some improvement on good catchy lines and the novel will good

Thank you very much for the support, i know i lack in English since I'm not an english person As for the editor, I don't have any budget to afford an editor