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ch 568 Chapter 570 Fire

The Days to Survive with Several Girls on the Uninhabited Island

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The plot collapses: All the heroines are broken!

Urban · Sheizzcoldasice

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Great job so far, but please make the chapters longer with more details on how the mechs looks and weapon designs, and fill in the world a bit more. I suggest a in depth overview of mech production and programming them as well academy life, plus he can find a experimental mech as he infiltrates enemy country as long term spy. Of course to change his character a bit for him to do so you can have Emma poisoned by that country's spy so he has to sneak in to get antidote. It can even be held in a secret lab under the enemy military base where he finds the experimental mech. Off topic a bit but NOT ENOUGH MECH NOVELS IN THIS WORLD!

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