Zorgus

Zorgus

male LV 15

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2019-03-05 Joined United States
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Zorgus
Zorgus
4 months ago
Posted

author is volume 2 related in any way to volume 1 ?i hate that ending for daniel’s story

Zorgus
Zorgus
6 months ago
Commented

i’m sure you have a plan but i want more hints on what rose is, it seems like she is stealing something from elara so maybe they are twins or magically linked

Zorgus
Zorgus
7 months ago
Posted

Really enjoy this book, has great power progression, decent scaling over time, a promise of unknown strength to be attained, promises of grand ambition awakening in the mc. Author I really hope you read this message is because the only thing wrong with this book is that mc has no regard for his wife even in his second life at the start of which he promised to himself to cherish his wife in. has cheated on his wife, sworn to himself and her to not do it again, then proceeds to do it again for no reason. Stop making mc cheat on and disrespect his wife please! I honestly will drop the book if this issue persists.

Zorgus
Zorgus
7 months ago
Commented

can you stop having him cheat on his wife for no reason fr author i might drop the book i don’t like cheaters

Zorgus
Zorgus
9 months ago
Posted

writing is chaotic and unorganized, frequently switching between pov without warning which results in a difficult read overall. initial impression of the characters and world building is decent. There is a lot of potential with their personalities but lots of work is needed in the way it’s written, show don’t tell type of thing.

Zorgus
Zorgus
11 months ago
Commented

janine is going to also become a slave like katherine cuz of the bit of mind power she accidentally left behind??

Zorgus
Zorgus
1 years ago
Commented

how long will his psychic maturation take?

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Zorgus
Zorgus
Zorgus
3 years ago
Commented

he needs to reward my boy Toros generously and soon!