I'm going to recommend slightly clearer formatting here, like you've done with the attributes. For example {Affinity level: Fire Element - High; Darkness Element - Average} So you would separate other affinities with something other than a colon. Feel free to use my choice of contextual separators, or figure out your own, but the colon and semi-colon are great friends who work well together.
Affinity level: Fire Element: High Darkness Element: Average.]
Fantasy · Ak02
A bow is muscle powered, in the manner that stronger muscles mean you can use a heavier draw bow, but I believe it's not the optimal choice for Nick as: firstly the bowstring and fletching can generate a notable noise upon impact with the forearm, if not a compound bow, and simply traveling though the air for the fletching; and Secondly that a bow with heavy draw to make use of Nick's situational strength would be completely useless while his ability is inactive, as with pulling strength reduced, he'd simply be unable to draw the bowstring back. Throwing spears are at least still useful even if you can't throw them, it's a less good normal spear, a bow you can't shoot leaves you with a much shorter pointed stick, the arrows. The only other good muscle power ranged weapon I can think of (more advanced than just throwing whatever is at hand lol) would be a "spear-throwing lever" or atlatl, but that might have been something lost to time, or require too much practice to be useful. Or heck, it could be a ton of other reasons.
"Since you are already set on using your arms and legs as weapons, I thought that a ranged option would be a good addition."
Fantasy · Warmaisach
Hey! That's really neat, exactly the sort of weapon I thought'd work well for Nick.
"They're throwing spears," Wyntor said.
Fantasy · Warmaisach
I'm glad this got recommended to me, the story is engaging and well written. I hate pointless repetition, and the reminder of what makes Kugelblitz important is quite timely, given that it was first explained quite a while ago.
ch 81 Chapter 81 – Marketplace
Fantasy · Warmaisach
I hope at some point, this author learned that punctuation is followed by a space, and that paragraphs, and pauses... exist.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Army Master is Released from Prison!
Urban · Emerging Blockhouse
Okay, while I can excuse missiles haveing a randomized thruster algorithm to dodge lasers, no ship is going to actively dodge any laser, it doesn't matter if you really are engaging 186,000 miles away, if you see them firing the laser, pointed at you, they already hit, because by the time you see them shoot, all the light that is bouncing off them to let you see them has gotten to you, just like the laser. I get that mech stories are hardly realistic, but if you want the reader to ignore some basic physics, don't bring them up in earlier chapters. You absolutely get a pass with the magic elite mechs, whose main point is that they go beyond normal limits with the use of exotic materials, but that doesn't give you a pass for normal ships. they can't see faster than light.
The Vandals replied with at least double the number of laser beams. However, their level of marksmanship was much lower, so they missed more often than not. They focused most of their fire against the enemy combat carriers, but the ships waded through the laser grids like graceful dolphins.
Sci-fi · Exlor
There's really been a lack of information on how these fleets are moving, other than Vandals are moving out from a minefield, constantly accellerating, since that's the only way the Finmoth Regal's engines failing would "slow it down". The Imodris scouts are apparently in the same direction the Vandals are leaving the minefield in, but other than being spread out, what moves are they even going to make? They could move toward the Vandals, but that would also put them closer to the mines, so they won't do that. They could stay still, but then the Vandals, who are constantly accellerating mind, would just blow past them, and Imodris isn't going to be able to catch up from a dead stop, even if they have somewhat more powerful engines. So Imodris has to be moving, and in the same direction as the Vandals, which means it should take a long while for the Vandals to actually get in combat with them, since Imodris still needs to get closer, but also match the Vandals speed once in combat range. If they go too slow, the vandals will go past them too fast, if they go to fast, they won't engage the enemy in time. But clearly none of this info is important.
This absolute suppression of speed gave the Vesian mech regiment ample confidence in preventing their prey from escaping. The only thing they needed to do to prevent the Flagrant Vandals from escaping into FTL was to throw a bunch of gravitic mines at them. These didn't need to be expensive or all that powerful. If they brought enough gravitic mines, they could even drag it out for several days.
Sci-fi · Exlor
Dear god, how could anyone dodge this emerald splash?
He traced in the air an arc of emerald green light with his right forefinger. The crescent moon-shaped energy mass released a barrage of emerald bullets made of pure mana, each one with the power of a cannonball.
Fantasy · Legion20
Truly strange that we don't just get a phonetic pronunciation, since aside from meaning inherent to the names in the original language, it's just a series of noises that identify a person. If they as humans can speak the planet's language, then they can say a name, just as much as the Japanese can say Todd.
"Her name. The pronunciation is just like that; there's no way to translate it."
Sci-fi · The Final Fool
Re-reading this, and only now did I realize Ince's name is a pun, probably. Ince Zangwill = Inks and quill.
"That's why it is at the highest security clearance. The search for Sealed Artifact 0-08 is only described verbally and never written in words. Even so, the description will be little," said Dunn with a sigh. "0-08 appears to be a common quill, but it does not need ink to write. That's all."
Lord of Mysteries
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving