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Glad to see another chapter! I’m really loving the book and I’m excited to see where you take it

We back!

I’m a fan. Keep going my guy

4 of the 5 chapters you just posted are repeats of the previous chaps

Nice potential, but the grammar is very bad. way too much effort to figure out what is supposed to be written.

Bruh don’t ruin this with a harem

This is amazing

Thanks for the update! I really love this story, so I’m excited whenever I see a new chapter come out!

Bruh, writing Onoki as such a raging moron is kinda wacky.

Don’t get me wrong, I’m really liking this story, but writing the daimyo as such a moron is getting a little old. Everyone knows that to speak equally as heads of a nation, the nations must have similar military backing. The daimyo is just a walking moneybag, there is literally nothing he can do. He is alive and in power due to the mercy of the hokage, and watching all these scenes of him as if he actually matters is a little stale. I feel like it is all just build up to a face-slapping moment or something.

Bruh it was still kinda lighthearted till you killed sokka

This is such a great fic, and I look forward to every new update. Props to how original you are making things and using plenty of new ideas. Really loving it so far, hope this continues

I was not expecting those twists my dude. Bold choices, but it’s all great. Loving this so far, very glad you continue to write this

This is a plagiarized work from cloud9stories called Revolution. This guy just stole it and changed the name. go find the original work and support the actual creator of this story

You could always bring in monsters from other pantheons if you want, as it fits with the world setting. Just have to find a reason why they would interact. Or yeah you could make some stuff up too, your call

Bruh I kinda hate you author. Every time a chapter drops I love it, and then it ends and I’m left waiting for another one!