DetachedDreamer - Profile

I like the story a lot, I like the male MC, its a unique origin as well. my biggest problem lies in the woman MC. she's done nothing to change canon. I know its early in the story but her refusal to help has honestly just made me look at her as an imaginary friend of the golden trio. I wish you'd kill her off because she's that useless and definitely the only reason I didnt give this story 5 stars. the commitment to the Lynn's backstory, training, development is noteworthy and praiseworthy but this female MC needs to be written off. No outcome has changed with her actions and sadly 95% of dialogue is still the same even with her around. useless. Make her useful or kill her off or this story won't ever reach its potential. changing canon events is all about the outcome not the how of it. you could say the same about the MC but at least he's not around the golden trio so he actually has an excuse for not doing anything but if canon events never change then ill make sure to correct this review and give it 2 stars.

While there is an entertaining aspect to this story there is literally no plot. everything that happens doesn't change canon. actually the story basically just plays in the background while people get rewards. possibly the dumbest premise in the world.

any story title that starts with "I," is a terrible story.

Great story, uniquish origin story. definitely a quality piece overall. The MC is pretty basic though. definitely the cliche standard everyone on this app likes tho. The fake reincarnator from our world who doesn't mind killing, is a low key battle junkie, and isn't a maniac. just really forced bull that became the norm because sad folk on here don't have any backbone in real life, so they live vicariously. he only likes his family, doesn't care about anything else except training, and lacks any moral compass. just an overpowered NPC basically but I only say it negatively because it seems like every fanfic follows this same pattern presently. Other than that an enjoyable story.

Good story but the perspective of the author has been corrupted by the fanfic culture and its prejudice towards certain characters. I find it boring, cliche, and playout at this point so it definitely impacts the quality of this story overall.

thank you for the info!

you're interpretation doesn't make it more "real." being dark doesn't mean more real. you don't understand the laws of a magical ninja dimension and how folk would act and respond with a magical energy inside them. just call it your AU. because you don't know a God damn thing about whats "real." annoying when fanfic authors try and say that.

the story gets worse, some how following canon in the most garbage way possible.

Terrible MC. obviously he has to show his metaphorical d*ck size every moment to make sure his is bigger than every other guys. Stole his brothers girl then hooked up with her while his brother is mutilated and killed. lol honestly at the point who wants to read any more about such a pathetic loser MC? its honestly embarrassing.

I just want a LotR fanfic that lasts. here's 5 stars to hoping!