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No!

Thank you for the chapters and keep up the pace of releasing chapters.

Please translate chapters at a faster pace, it's too slow.

Author, lightning rods don't work against Raiton jutsus (lightning release) or the cloud village wouldn't exist...

The story is good, just be careful please.

Author, you are either being too detailed or filling the chapters with nonsense. Half of the description of the Wheatland festival is useless for the fanfic story, in fact it only has negative points as it breaks the pace of the story and makes it very slow. And the battle scenes you did before, you can't visualize almost anything, it's as if you were "seeing" two people discussing Modern Art with each other...

Wow 😄 😄 😄 thanks for the chapter!!!

The story is very good, one of the 5 best in Naruto for me, but if it continues like this the author will die of old age before the fanfic reaches the beginning of Shippuden...

Land of Wheat or Land of Rice? I think you are confusing the author.

MC with three tomoe Sharingan and using clone, when genjutsu is cheaper and would have greater benefits for a genin. The author created a protagonist with serious brain problems.

More mistakes: lack of knowledge of the Sharingan. A genjutsu intended for genin would not have this effect on a Sharingan 3 tomoe user. Even if he is a genin, genjutsu is one of the 3 innate abilities of the Sharingan, even if the user does not train genjutsu, at the very least he is good enough for his ninja rank.

I'm already starting to feel frustrated with the story. These are errors so basic that they leave room for major errors in the script. And Earth is vulnerable to lightning. Example: Kakashi vs Kakuzu...

I made a comment on the last chapter author, they are just suggestions, you do what you want because it's just my opinion... And thank you for the chapter

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The harem serves to create alliances that from a geopolitical point of view are vital for the North. _1st: Some wild clans for Ned to be able to develop plans Beyond the Wall, which is a place of enormous importance in every way and he won't be able to stay there to monitor it all the time. The North also lacks population. It's a dream for the North to achieve everything without a massive increase in population and allies. _2nd: The Mormonts. They are one of the most loyal houses in the entire North, they are in a perfect place to open a new transport route for everything that comes and goes to Beyond the Wall, and also to defend themselves and monitor the region. The Wall remains important, but it doesn't even have enough troops, and if it does have troops, its loyalty is doubtful, especially when the North is short of manpower. _3rd: Two southern noble houses that will be extremely useful in the future are the Tully (as I doubt that the men of this house will be alive for long) and the Blackwood (they have more similarity with the North than all the others in the south, although he will most likely lose land and retreat to occupy the Frey position). Both are very important to be able to control the region north of riverland (way to the North, since the south of riverland is considered lost as soon as the wars begin), destroy the Frey who are inevitable enemies and occupy a vital position that the The North must control, and to have some influence and power in the South. Breaking up completely makes no sense, the North has an absurd lack of population, technology, qualified professionals, etc. _4th: Other places that the North must control because they are important from a geopolitical point of view (no wonder there is the war in Russia, one of the reasons is this) are: Skagos and the 3 Sisters. _5th: I'm only using geopolitical arguments, and even so, realism dictates that these plans are not 100% accurate, without them it's just a dream to have all these things in control of the protagonist or the North without a harem or marriages (with Ned, Brandon and maybe even Benjen). Unless the protagonist is super lucky where 100% of people will be loyal and all subordinates are honest and flawless.