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its a good novel and a new concept i think, its just the translation become messy at around 100. And its FING SLOW, i know u need to explain all stuff so we got immersed, but imagine almost 200!! just to enter the academy and at 9th origin qi also 20% willpower. there's still thousands pounds realm, ten thousands, sky soaring realm, cloud real, mountain sea and other. how fing long it will take [img=nervous]

wow, a good read i say. i though the system would point out which company or someone good to invest and later he would harvest it. but it just using money for his gf and get around 10 times return. interesting indeed but will be hard to explain with growing number of return

lmaooooo, nice review author. from chapter 2 and the little sister has lot of his photos i knew this would be great novel. count me in!!!

bro, i really think high of this novel. i think this is innovative and creative. the only unfortunate thing is too many woman and the fortune he accumulated is too absurd, maybe you can do the reward slowly and with matching prize. something that make him bleed but he still have to pay for it (mission price). and the world building, you need to give it some attention. and this is a perfect novel! i got your back bro! that's it my advice. i myself isn't a writer but I've read many kind of novel so i hope you can improve and become one of the best author i'll ever known