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I don't care if it's 1 waifu or 1000, my problem is that she's an OC, there are so many waifus in Bleach and the protagonist's only love interest being an OC kind of makes no sense to me, I'll read a few more chapters and with that I'll go see if I continue reading or not.

You can write about any female character, you seem to be quite interest by Ochako so it would be better to put her as the female lead. But honestly I prefer the older women of BNHA, such as: Mirko, Lady Nagant, Ryukyu, Mount Lady, Midnight. I also like some female characters like Nejire, Momo, Mei, Mina, Toru that despite being invisible I like their cheerful personality, Itsuka Kendo, and some others, Tsuyu and Jiro are pretty cool too but the Fanarts make them better than they really are. But as I said before I prefer the older women of BNHA.

True, but that's precisely why I said that it would be better if the protagonist were a demon, much better than creating an elven race that doesn't even exist in the world of Kenja no Mago, a race that is basically slowly turning into a demon.

So by your logic, the protagonist shouldn't like Maria because she is an 'inferior human', besides, it would be better if the protagonist was a demon, it would make much more sense in the world of Kenja no Mago instead of creating a beserker elf who is basically a demon, arrogant, bloodthirsty, without humanity, what's the point of being created among humans then?. It would be better if he were a demon and approached the story from the point of view of the demonic race.

The story is good, but the way it's going I kind of understand why so few people are reading it. First there is a reincarnator who is not the protagonist with a The gamer system, Second you gave this same reincarnator the chance to get all the canonical characters of the DxD universe, for most people this gives the feeling of NTR, Third from what I I understand none of the canonical female characters is going to be the protagonist's love interest, who will probably be an OC character, plus there's the fact that it's not a harem, I know a lot of people don't like it, but for that you have look the general context of the world, For example, the world of DxD is basically a world created to be a harem full of fanservice, where the canonical protagonist manages to beat the gods by being a pervert. What I mean by that is the story is good, but the kind of audience that is looking for a DxD fanfic to read, expect at least the protagonist to interact with the female characters in the story and not a bunch of OC characters, they don't necessarily have to be the main heroines. It is worth mentioning that this is just my opinion, as I said before the story is good, but I think it would be for a different target audience than expected for a fanfic in the DxD world. Also for the harem haters what are you doing reading a DxD fanfic, I know a lot of stories have been spoiled because of the harem, but that depends a lot on the world the story takes place in, the least you would expect from a fanfic DxD is a harem as it is the main premise of Anime and LN.

Author I have a doubt, what does the protagonist look like?. You've never described him, the only thing we know is that he's Haley's twin brother, but there's never been a proper description of what he looks like. We know what the other characters are like because of the show, even Gigi because she's a real person. I'd like a picture or at least a description, as so far I'm picturing him as Aomine, but it doesn't feel right.

I understand, it was just a doubt I had, for me it doesn't matter if the protagonist has a love interest or not, as long as the story is well written.

I have a doubt, would the protagonist have a love interest?. If yes which one?. Because you said the protagonist wouldn't have a human form, I don't see how a normal normal girl would fall in love with a scary magical creature like an enderman, I'm not saying it's impossible, some people have rather eccentric preferences but I can't see it happening with none of the potterverse girls, maybe some eccentrics like Luna Lovegood or half veela like Fleur, that or an OC character. I would like you to answer if possible.

If you want to change that is up to you, because this can be something that bothers me, but it's more of a personal thing, if you think it's necessary, go ahead. Also thanks for the new chapter.

I understand what you mean, I asked precisely because I think you changed your mind, the same thing happened with a fanfic I was reading called 'Head-Patting in Marvel', it was supposed to be just 1 protagonist, but in the course of the story he decided switch to multiple leaders. Your fanfic is good, I only made the comment above because it was bothering me a little, because I expected one thing and it was another, you know?. If I already knew it would be like this, I wouldn't have bothered, because I would already be expecting it to be like this.