ravenously_fluked - Profile

All I do these days is try and find good harem fanfic in this godforsaken app with very low quality works. Luckily this fic is actually readable for me with good grammar and writing style. And actually quite enjoyable to read as well. I'm really excited about the inclusion of God Of Highschool. And yeah sorry... I really have no idea how to properly write a review. (I fucking forgot most of the character names in this school arc though)

I don't really prefer lolis (hopefully everybody don't, at least for real life), but I really like this fanfic. Harem may turn-off those self righteous people (But will read incest, ntr and other abyssal level of degeneracy that can be considered), and honestly this pokemon collection isn't really good either. Most members are introduced once but ignored for the rest of the story while some stays throughout the fic. I do love the fact that the MC is not really a harem seeking protagonist, at the start at least, and I really like his character. The funny other characters and memes are also great. This fanfic is honestly better than other harem fics, and generally just better than most other fanfics on this app. (Also I really love the updating stability of this fic and hopefully the author won't drop.)

Bot spamming and the privilege to just remove whatever comment and rating an author can see really ruins the rankings. Can't believe that you can sometimes see a fanfic with very bad grammar, no proper punctuations and cringe characterizations on higher rankings just because they spammed the ratings. It would be good if most authors learns from their mistakes but meh, they don't read any comments and criticism at all. Anyways, this was just a rant, hopefully this story wouldn't become like that.

This is not a hidden gem, very underated story or whatsoever. It was literally translated and released here for just a bit more than half a day. Also, as I can see the translation is awful like probably 95% of Chinese translated fanfiction pasted here on this site. The punctuations are good I think but the translation itself is awful and getting a proofreader is what I would recommend. Hopefully it'll get better though, the premise is at least decent.

I really like the Idea of this Fanfic. Shirou being kind of OP, which I personally like, is really rare even on other Fanfic sites. I would only recommend to improve the use of Punctuations and use more capital letters for better visuals on reading. Good Luck and hopefully this won't be dropped!