The story seems good and has a lot of potential.Its enjoyable but I HAVE to say this, the Grammar was a Disaster...... How do you make mistakes like is almost every line? Write the narration in past tense and the conversation in the present tense....Thats how you are supposed to go. I would love to complete this novel but please with better translation, otherwise it was truely a torture for me. Hope this gets a better translation [img=recommend]
Urban · Rohan_Alfornon
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The story seems good and has a lot of potential.Its enjoyable but I HAVE to say this, the Grammar was a Disaster...... How do you make mistakes like is almost every line? Write the narration in past tense and the conversation in the present tense....Thats how you are supposed to go. I would love to complete this novel but please with better translation, otherwise it was truely a torture for me. Hope this gets a better translation [img=recommend]
Supreme Overlord System
Urban · Rohan_Alfornon