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Novels without action are boring

I'm dropping this novel, the beginning is bad and makes no sense. The MC is just dumb who thinks he is smart, trusting demons is always bad and thinking he would be the strongest in the world with a wish seems forced. When he gets to the next world instead of trying to understand how the world works, he tries to create a demonic mark on his own soul without caring how it would work or what repercussions it would have and almost kills himself. Putting this together with the pace of the novel being slow, strange and with several infodump makes everything boring and tiresome.

When will we go back to having 1 ch/day? As the updates are spaced out sometimes I lose where I left off ........................................................

It's not a bad novel, but several points are left to be desired. On the one hand the MC is cruel for being cruel at times, at other times he is naive and silly. For example chapter 312 leaves a bad taste in the mouth, instead of getting caught he should have some self destruct matrix that takes all civilians and attackers to death along with his clone. Make something memorable out of it, he might die but the enemies will pay a high price. He spends most of the novel making plans that never work out because the inspector is omniscient and has a photographic memory. Giving plot armor to the MC's enemies doesn't seem to be the best choice. The sex scenes are repetitive, he uses the same sentences every time. Example: "he takes out his giant rod and..." It seems not very descriptive

This novel is good, but I don't like the interactions with the system. The system gives everything to the main character, be it skills, items and talismans He is dependent on the system and is often played the clown for the system's entertainment. Example: That nonsense of leaving the name or symbol behind or he sees a super strong enemy and has to steal him and put himself at risk of being chased and killed. A thief is someone connected with benefits, you want to be as discreet as possible and not attract ever stronger enemies to hunt you down out of sheer arrogance and foolishness. The best way forward was to use multiple identities to cause chaos and not let the enemy understand where the threat is coming from. Leaving a name behind is like painting a target on your back.

An average novel, no innovation and more of the same. The author could have explored more the cultivation of techniques in an unusual or absurd way and put some comedy. The special talent is forgotten with time and practically only appears later as a tool to identify items. Around chapter 230 the translator abandons it and turns it into an MTL translation and ends up killing the novel once and for all

I liked the story, but the plot became repetitive and with fillers First, the chapters called "Battle" and "Clash" where the MC trains don't add anything (filler) Second, the VR world doesn't particularly help the story progression and even hinders it (filler) Third, the system has infinite energy and creates things out of nothing. You could tell the MC has something to do with the Devas, but it seems like bullshit. Fourth, the development is very slow, I'm around chapter 500 and the store updates leave something to be desired. He is still in the mortal realm and it doesn't look like he will change before chapter 1000

I read until chapter 188, I ended up dropping it! The story development is confusing and slow, the MC looks like a side character in a horror thriller. He is so weak and useless, with no protagonist aura and completely passive being used and analyzed like a pawn. The protagonist until the chapter I saw fails to capture attention and keep it, while the author focuses on other characters that no one cares to show some action.

Meet the king of filler, in addition to creating a tournament that lasts 100 chapters with backstory of unimportant characters, smut scenes of 3 chapters per wife, using parts of the last chapter to fill space and announcing other novels in chapters to reach the minimum of words of the contract Apart from the infodump that happens every time the MC levels up and the dumbing down to create a longer story

The guy is not a full-time writer. He has a Patreon and a Ko-fi, but he doesn't seem to have many signatures.