A fantastic piece so far, I think the pacing is neat and well structured, balancing life inside and outside of the game, much like a book I’m writing myself on another account scheduled for next year, plus this story has minimal grammatical errors, a level headed protagonist and a structured world building experience on both worlds.
"Don't worry, Uncle Ben, with great power comes greater responsibility - just like what you said," Leon replied.
Fantasy · Galanteo
It’s on a ship 🚶🏾
The Battle continued for 30 whole minutes, and with each second the battle got more and more intense, more bystanders died, around 30 men wearing Black Suits were lying on the floor with blood coming out of their bodies. The entire Hall room reeked of irony smell of blood.
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
I don’t blame him, the bigger question is why is the waitress taking so long to put in the order? 🤷🏾♂️
Ye Xingchen furrowed his brow and impatiently said, "Enough with the nonsense. Bring the food!"
Sci-fi · Frozen Emperor
It’s an average so it’s correct
"Fuck!" King Yama couldn't help but swear, "What did that kid do in his last life? How could he have such bad luck in his early 20s? I remember when Hitler was killed by a car after his reincarnation, he only lost more than 50000 points. He's only in his 20s, and how could he have more than -80000 points? Was he Hideki Tojo in his last life?"
Urban · Joking
The confusion is mutual
"Wow boss has a child"
Fantasy · Alpian_Novel
Did a two year old write this story? because this is just dumb tbh.
ch 12 It's Just You and Me
Urban · JovankaVita
Like it’s just too forced
"get to the point, if you don't have anything to say then don't waste my time".
Anime & Comics · A_Sinner
I’ll be real his hatred or disdain for Arthur is to compensate for the lack of ideas.
"get to the point, if you don't have anything to say then don't waste my time".
Anime & Comics · A_Sinner
Regardless of how you think about it, for his age, Arthur is strong.
ch 30 We meet Again
Anime & Comics · A_Sinner
You actually made me laugh for a bit there mate 😂😂
"Alright then, let's part on good terms."
Urban · No Right
I dont think anyone realizes that this is the first clear and clean sentence in the book YET!!
Peter :" It's true I like you, but I always thought that it is not right to you Felicia, try to understand if you fall in love with me you will also have to take care of Alice and I don't want to burden you with responsibilities. you have your whole life ahead of you." He put his head down not daring to look at her eyes.
Movies · INSANE_GAMER
And the reality is that they are gold diggers!!
This was not gold-digging, but reality.
Urban · Legendary Youth
This had me dying 😂🤣💀
"Yep, I'm screwed. I think I will have better chances of learning how to fly by moving my arms."
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
Took the words out of my mouth 😂😂💀
You obtained 01 status points.
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
If you can, change “drive” to “ride” to fit the era
After withdrawing the reins, Kotter Harlan shrank the distance between him and the carriage and reported respectfully, "Master Locke, it's only half an hour's drive away from Lister. It will take about an afternoon to reach your castle."
Fantasy · Daoist2m27Ul
Good chapter though
ch 42 Round Two with "God"
Action · Alphachoas
The goddess must be a hypocrite, not wanting violence, and wanting him to save humanity yet, wanting to revive her child that found ecstasy in violence and murder of humanoids and also, adking him to kill his own sister?? BRtuh, now thats messed up!!
ch 42 Round Two with "God"
Action · Alphachoas
That’s sooooo cringeeere!!! “This is ISEKAII” 💀🥴🤮
"You think this is still school? This is isekai, and here, I could kill you without any teacher stopping me!" Roger flexed his shoulders, advancing towards Owen.
School Transmigration: I, Chosen as the Saint by Dragons at the Start
Fantasy · Sesame_Cookies