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serene_elements

serene_elements

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Casual reader in her 30s.

2019-03-17 Joined United Kingdom

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head clean off

They saw an enormous Kraken falling on top of the giant, tangling it up with its tentacles and starting to bite down on it. The giant tried to attack, but Kassandra's tentacles stopped any movement by tangling it up.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

serene_elements
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Ana cared for him = Chloe cared for him

When he heard this, Archer felt a surge of happiness, realizing that Ana cared more for him than his mother, leaving him oddly touched. Chloe seemed to sense his emotions and released him, offering him a warm smile before departing with Osoric and Ana, who remained silent.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

serene_elements
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five girls.. not four

The older woman smiled as he returned to the domain as the sun started to set. When he entered the treehouse, he saw four girls sitting in the living room. Teuila, Nala, Talila, Kassandra, and Ella were chatting while drinking tea.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

serene_elements
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I'd that meant to say was? or should it say wasn't going to tell him?

As he did this, Mary appeared in front of him with a worried expression, ''I know we've just got together, but I hope this doesn't change things between us,'' she said in a troubled voice. ''I was going to tell you until Lucrezia sensed my power.''

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

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'full' stomachs

Despite the stunt, Archer wiped the bread off his face and resumed eating, ignoring the antics and continuing with his meal. After an hour of feasting, the two women fell asleep on the large bed due to their fallen stomachs.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

serene_elements
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it won't let me highlight the paragraph below this one. but it should say 'illuminating' the outside street

The inn was fancy-looking, well-maintained, and crafted from strong Stormwood that could withstand the harsh northern weather. Archer noticed the complex carvings of mythical beasts and warriors.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

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'main' backers

Once reaching her, Archer cast Aurora Healing on the pale-skinned woman, who started to come to her as his blue eyes opened, and when she spotted him, a bright smile appeared as she started to speak in a labored voice, ''The Death's Whisper Guild captured us just as I was signaling for you as they hate you due to your actions against the Novgorodians who are their man backers.''

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

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two = too

Her violet eyes looked into his before she spoke, ''Flee Archer! They are two strong.''

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

serene_elements
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the bit about watching the magic knights herding them towards Ophie and the girls is repeated from the paragraph above.

When this happened, he used Mana Manipulation to create a ten-meter-high stone wall that encircled a large area while observing the Magic Knights as they began to herd people toward Ophelia and his girls.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

serene_elements
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say (something)

They nodded with a smile and started talking to Ella. He guided Elara away from the girls, leaning close to whisper into her pointed ear, "Speak your mind. I can see you want to say 

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

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sitting on

While relaxing, Archer looked around the room and noticed how bare it was now that he could pay attention. There was the bed, a few cupboards alongside a table, and chairs that he was sitting out.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

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bad = bed

''Shut up, you horny dragon, and you know I loved it! Look at the sheets,'' she responded before sliding off the bad.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

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her eyes rolled back

Archer began thrusting into Sia, who clung onto him while biting into his neck and releasing guttural moans as her eyes rolled into the back in pleasure. Seeing her reaction, he smiled and gradually increased the intensity until she was completely overwhelmed.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

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tender? neck

Archer got covered in her love juices as she let out a pleasure-filled scream that pleased him before he moved her over to the bed and climbed in between her legs. He started kissing her lender neck until Sia's breaths came in shallow gasps.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

serene_elements
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shock overtook (her)

serene_elements
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yes and now (he's) done that building a kingdom (thing)

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hair not eyes

Archer examined the boy's short black eyes and glowing red eyes. His features were delicate and ladylike, which confused him, but he shook his head. His smile widened as he greeted his friend, motioning for him to come closer.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

serene_elements
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does archer know that aeris is a girl yet?

As the four girls shifted their attention to him, their faces beamed in response. They approached before greeting him with kisses and hugs, which made him smile. Kassandra, Teuila, and Maeve then settled down and joined them all.

A Journey That Changed The World.

A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

serene_elements
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reigniting the heat as they (gave into) their desires

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team

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