I'd say the lack of goal for the mc makes it feel slow
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ch 28 A Mandatory Vacation part - 2
Anime & Comics · DevionKing
You pasted this twice
Another group of Amazons stands waiting at the mouth of the cave, an equal number of those "escorting" you. The leader of their group is a raven-haired woman, helmet tucked into her side. She looked to be older than the unnaturally youthful Amazons you had so far encountered, though no less beautiful. Though she wore nothing to mark her out from those around her, the way the others stood just behind and the regal bearing of how she carried herself, she is clearly someone of importance.
Anime & Comics · DevionKing
an extra "H to"
The Potter scion liked to distance himself from the man. He liked to think that they were two different people, even if the two of them tended to overlap. Perhaps it was a desperate attempt to not H to share the man's fate, and if it meant having a shard of immaturity left in him, then it was a price he was willing to pay.
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
Asmongler?
All until today, that is. As I was watching yet another video of a balding dude, a pop-up suddenly appeared in the middle of my screen, forcing the video to a stop.
Anime & Comics · SlyOW
The delta is upper Egypt not lower
ch 11 ‘What would you do?’
Book&Literature · DaculeDNamikaze365
English, English where art thou English?
ch 0 2 Chapter 2 - A new life is not as peaceful as I thought.
Movies · Chris_Mayo
Barely humanish.