FirstHumanWolf

4mth

Replied to Ventallion

There is one by the name of `Interesting Times`. Honestly, the best Mass Effect fanfic I have read.

[Mass Effect]

Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun

Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever

FirstHumanWolf

8mth

Posted

Story is good so far ( cap 21). Don't understand why some people are dissatisfied with cap 20 ( and giving bad review's at that). Nen is a give and take kind of power, so it is not far fetched. Just look at kurapika's power's. Giving it 5 stars to counter som of the bad review's.

HxH: adventure of a lifetime

Anime & Comics · Old_Fart_3269

FirstHumanWolf

9mth

Commented

Tina*

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Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Games · Follower_of_Abadom

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Commented

Will always be*

Pokemon Eggs are always will be the same Pokemon as their Mother. Because Gardevoir is the mother of The Pokemon Egg, the child automatically becomes a Ralts.

Pokemon: Master of tactics

Anime & Comics · alex02373

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Commented

If i'm not wrong, naruto stopped using substitute jutsu. Because of Sasuke's rinisaringan ability. And it's to OP.

[A/N : Battles are hard to write… Especially when you consider jutsus like Body Flicker and Substitution. Anyways, the first actual fight that I wrote. Lemme know your thoughts.]

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Commented

Congrats

[A/N : The fanfic has crossed 100k words!]

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Commented

Welcom back and thanks for the chapter

ch 53 Chapter 52 : Up a Few Notches

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Commented

Thank you for the chapter

ch 19 Training (5)

Destiny: The Legendary Hunter

Video Games · Writers_Ablood

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Commented

Salam means "peace" actually.

I head to the pavement while saying Salam (hey) to the butcher's son in their shop next to the building entrance.

Dragonborn Saga

Video Games · El_Don

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Commented

Guilty as charged. The reason for the 3 star was because i belived that 13 chapters wasen't much to go on to warrant more, but....but i might just be stingy. None the less, thank you very much for the chapter.

ch 14 Talk about the future

Naruto: Puppet Master

Anime & Comics · trudny1

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Commented

Tax for chapter and yes, pleas do share your findings.

Long-time no see guys. The reason for my absence was that I *cough* got lost on the path of life. I absolutely did not find a lot of good fanfics that I had to read. *sagely nods*

Naruto: Puppet Master

Anime & Comics · trudny1

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Commented

Shouldn't the minimum age for chakra unlocking be 5?

"lecture! shouldn't we be unblocking our chakra nodes"

Naruto: Story of a Kumo ninja

Anime & Comics · Kylino

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Posted

The plot is good so far. Mc personality is also decent. The background building is not at the same level but, there might not be much to say when the village is in a desert. The trio's friendship is refreshing and not stiff......I am not very good at writing reviews so that's all I have. Hope this motivates you to write more author.

Naruto: Puppet Master

Anime & Comics · trudny1

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Commented

If this is the case why does the MC want to take over root? and use Zabuza as his eyes and ears.

Orochimaru has always thirsted for eternal life but he doesn't know what he wants to do when he gets it. During and after the 4th ninja war he saw that even though Kaguya and other Otutsuki live for almost thousands and millions of years, they still aren't satisfied and were still greedy for something or the other. He understood that once he gives in to greed, there is no stopping it and maybe one day even he will end up like someone who wants everything the world has to offer and still be unsatisfied.

Naruto: Uchiha's Genjutsu Demon

Anime & Comics · lazarus898

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Commented

Thank you for writing this. This shows that MC is not just a calculativ person but someone who cares about others.

Yami stood up and saw himself drenched in sweat. For a second, he didn't know why but the thought of Itachi came to his mind. He needed to find a way to have Tsunade heal Itachi. If Yami waits for too long then Itachi's lung disease might become incurable. He might have not personally lived as Yami at the start of his life but after fusing with the memories, he felt as if this was the life he lived. Yami may be cold and ruthless but if he can't protect those who care about him and who he cares about then what's the use of all that strength. It just becomes a meaningless struggle. Like the one, Orochimaru is in.

Naruto: Uchiha's Genjutsu Demon

Anime & Comics · lazarus898

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Commented

Is that a good idea??

'Danzo you can't even hide the greed and hatred in your eyes. I don't want to kill you and eradicate your root...I want to destroy each and every plan of yours and take over root for myself.'

Naruto: Uchiha's Genjutsu Demon

Anime & Comics · lazarus898

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter. Really like how detailed the chapter is in addition to more in depth lore.

ch 18 Interesting Times - Chapter 18

Interesting Times

Video Games · Zanarkand_Kido

FirstHumanWolf

1yr

Replied to Osborn123

You have a point. But I think this chapter was meant to set the mood for the next one, which is nothing new for writers to do. I, who am a big mass effect fan, appreciated it, as long as the next chapter lives up to the build-up.

ch 0 2 Chapter 2