Ben3volentCracker

3yr

Commented

There should be only one click at the end of the magazine since there is no combustion or recoil to pull the bolt back

Click! Click! Click!

My Lovely Miss Esper

Action · Shynobi

Ben3volentCracker

3yr

Commented

Support for Author.

ch 63 Chapter 63 – The hideout

My Lovely Miss Esper

Action · Shynobi

Ben3volentCracker

3yr

Commented

I shall claim my post. nice

A.P.: 42.0

Into the Zombie World

Urban · Neil_Ads

Ben3volentCracker

3yr

Commented

I shall claim my post. nice

A.P.: 42.0

Into the Zombie World

Urban · Neil_Ads

Ben3volentCracker

3yr

Commented

Clever girl

"Nature is truly cruel… who would have expected that she even knew that there are humans who are intelligent enough to figure out her array… too clever… Haha…" Curt muttered to himself as he suddenly went in another direction.

My Lovely Miss Esper

Action · Shynobi

Ben3volentCracker

3yr

Commented

thanks for the chapter, Author.

ch 33 Chapter 33 – Forming an LEP core

My Lovely Miss Esper

Action · Shynobi

Ben3volentCracker

3yr

Commented

these cocky young masters are getting annoying.

"How dare this lowly mortal act like that with senior sister Cherry, and he is also that close to her, this is truly unacceptable. I need to get rid of this mongrel tonight as this is an insult to us cultivators. Only I am worthy to be with senior sister Cherry and none else. He, he." Said Jing Lei to himself as a glint of killing intent appeared in his eyes.

The Geared Immortal

Fantasy · Shynobi

Ben3volentCracker

3yr

Posted

Overall, the story is great and I see a lot of potential for this story. I may not be an author but the way you pieced together the outside world with the protagonist gave a vibe of a vigilante to Kurt. The grammar also wasn't bad, and the introduction of Kurt being lower than an average person but rising to power through memories of an immortal cultivator that was identical to him was fascinating. In conclusion, the story is great and I look forward to reading your novels.