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you do know that by saying do not unlock... u were actually daring some of us to do it 😏

are you changing release schedule??

this is a filler chapter and you know it... all that could have fit in a single paragraph maybe less. This chapter and the previous chapter and maybe the next 3 chapters can be made into a single chapter but the author will stretch this confrontation for the next 4 chapters all in the name of build up... The author has to stop being lazy in his creativity an stop stringing us along... jus because we are reading for free doesn't mean we have accept reading below average creativity... a good story like this needs the utmost creativity.. it has its uniqueness that will turn to waste if the author continues to be lazy or gives stupid reasons for producing less than subpar work instead of doing a proper introspection and doing a better job... um not being rude um just giving my honest to God opinion of the way I see this novel going that's why I wrote"it's your story you can choose to listen or not it's up to you" earlier

H_Bondini isn't bring rude... it's just the plain truth... it's getting anoying to read a whole chapter that could have been reduced to a single paragraph...this comment section is meant for us readers to raise our opinions... and you can't call a person rude for just telling the truth... there was no I'll intension behind the words, just a word of advise to the author...

I love your story but man you ruin it with this filler chapters... I swear a person only needs to unlock 1 chapter out of 10 chapters to get a proper continuous flow to the story...just get creative man you are going to end up losing most of your following because nobody has the free passes to waste on chapters where the story has no progression at all... whether you take heed or not is up to you it's your story after all

Man the wait is killing me

cliffhangers man turn it down man you killing ma[img=update]