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I think that Goddes desevers to be an inSult

I can now after the fact can say Somone better beat up william for being an idout becouse Deus Ex Machia is Not a way to win a fight

I was gonna complain but others have done a better job

The more important wrong here Is he can ask wendy where she gor the candy and fOllow the other to the source

Throuple

Man one story will nip a promblem in the bud instead pf lettimg ot fester

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I dont think she knows what indiffrent means

You really need a reason for why she is so casual before this chapter brcouse thus is where your gonna lose readers becouse after being tortured for 5 years this doesn’t make sense

What are they lettinG him read

Its a witch

So you get a voice in your head telling you to kill the gods and take over the world and your reaction is “yep that sounds right” other than a sentave saying i dident ask for this

I would go with soul or something rather than peice of meat

Boo you writer

FeeL like there should be more of a break between the story and the advertisement

Cool status screen but feel like that should of been mentioned Before now