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Author-san please let him travel to TORIKO universe please.

I want to put 5 star cause it picks my interest but, is this and illness of being Chinese novel? It’s very distracting when there is an takeback or error when it comes to numbers, gender, and cultivation. You know it’s kinda frustrating. Hope you can fix this small details.

Awesome novel but kinda sad. I expect there is Toriko world anyway I recommend this novel. Hope author you will make Toriko Fanfic even if it’s small or big Arc.

Very well made. This one deserves to be picke.

After Ch66I know he will eventually got HAREM but don't make it to obvious and artificial. It's kinda force actually. YOU KNOW GIRLS HERE KINDA EASY TO GET. Also it's cringe u know. Don't make it so very very detailed praising that makes u cringe.

After reading Ch13 MC is kinda CREEP making girls drunk then *** . Saying unclear relationship to others (STRANGER) even though they had *** but you know you can slowly put romance and harem but don't ruin this Novel. It's kinda force and you put on you synopsis that the character was related to your real life so is your Girls or Female Friends are easy to get. Is that what you try to say on your novel ? But I'll still read this to see if there is an improvement.THE REST IS OKAY.- MY HONEST REVIEW