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thank you, my brudda. I hope you find some good stories on this website.

man, those 10 books you read must have been trash for you to defend this. maybe you need to get better taste and stop defending laziness.

that is just a shity excuse for one if your author who uses this website, knowing the translator is bad, that is still your problem. you chose to use this website. again, this is just laziness on the author. I saw a few authors on this website edit their work fixing its problems. if the website is stopping from fixing their problem in any way. quess what that's their problem again. as they chose this website instead of one that allows them to edit or have a better translator. nothing you said isn't the author failure to make something actually good. I'm sorry that other people who don't know any english still actually put effort into their work to make translate it correctly. I'm so sorry that you have never seen a writer actually make sure their work is translated correctly. again, I don't need to be 5 star Cook to know that Serve Stale burnt food is bad, nor do you need to 5 star Cook to know not serve rotten food. but I guess if you're brain-dead, you might think that. And i don't need to be a writer to know I should make sure my story is readable.

this best rating i can give as the story was just garbage. The first problem is grammar. the second is writing quality. the third is repeating sentences just to fill the word count. which shows lacking skill in writing and shows us, the reader, you don't care about our experience. if i was told this was written by Ai, I wouldn't believe them as even bad ai can write better. this isn't 10 years ago. You have every tool available to make a story with good writing quality. if you can't afford an editor, guess what's been made recently. yes, that is called Ai, and you can go use chatgpt to check for any spelling mistake. here's a prompt you can use: "Check for any spelling mistakes." Which is one of the many Prompt you can use to Improve your story. You have so many tools at Your fingertips that it's maddening when you say murder instead of failed assassination Attempt. Character is he in one Sentences, then the next is a she. This simply ruins the flow of the story. There are so many issues at point. this author just needs to hire an editor or actually put effort into his writing. cause I put more effort into this review than the author at this point. to see such lazy writing is just appalling. I tried to give you the benefit of the doubt. but at chapter 75, which I paid for and believe when say, "Don't support this author ever!" okay, little Harsh, but until some big changes in overall writing quality and overall story telling. I will keep saying not to support this author.

the review who said to turn off your brain, you really understated how badly you will need to turn your brain off. I felt like I had gotten brain damage from reading this story. I have no words then to describe this story other than pure brain damage

after reading more in which i lose brain cells. I can say definitely this story is garbage and isn't worth your time. I might have been last Harsh if webnovel didn't recommend this garbage.

I can't tell if this is simply amateur writing, bad translation, or this was written by Ai. if it's amateur writing, hopefully you will improve. if it's a bad translation, it will hopefully you can fix it. if it's ai, please do a little bit of editing because the ai isn't that good yet and still needs a human touch and editing.

this story doesn't have the best story I read nor the best writing. but this author does know how to make an entertaining story. which can make up for any flaws they have. which tells me their writing should be able to get better over time. as long they continue to improve their writing and storytelling. few more improvements i could see them on Kindle selling their books. I would recommend this story as you will get a few laughs out of it and will be Entertain

I wanted to like this story, but reading it was painful because of how poorly this was written. I have read other stories with a really bad translation that still has a good story. Despite it having bad translation, this isn't one of them. this story feels like it was written by someone who never took any writing lessons or read a good book in their life. maybe this story gets better, but I'm not going to be paying to find out. I wish the author luck on his writing, and please go read some good books to improve your storytelling

it's not bad but not good either. it's hard to tell how good this story is because it's Translate is bad. so far, this story is around 2-3star. I rated 2 stars because it's really badly translated, or I hope it just badly translates. its writing didn't seem too good, all things considered. but again, this could be due to many translations problems. hopefully, this story can be rewritten or edited as this would be a massive improvement. but doubt it as webnovel, and most of the writers aren't like royalroad writers. who will rewrite parts to improve their story. hopefully, in your next story or later in this one, we can see improvements to your writing or translations.

thank you for saving me time.

this was honestly pretty bad not the worse story ever but it can have itsenjoyable moments. vampire slice of life is really bad name for this story. it really should be called Alabama vampire. can't recommend it unless you have nothing else to read or into vampire incest.

honestly this novel is a disappointment. normally I expect some degree of bad writing quality which is common for webnovel. usually the novel that i read are some flaw or pretty flaw with bad writing quality but their readable this isn't one of them. maybe it's writing is better for the chapters behind a paywall. until this novel gets someone to edit writing. I won't support this author nor do I recommend him/her. 2 star best this author should get because of writing quality affecting every aspect of this book. this honestly could have been a decent 4 star book