Any reason Fleur is missing from the list of wives?
ch 323 Ballas's End, Vorax Fulfillment
Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds
I realise that the mother lacks some information, but she also knows some, for example she know about the sacrifices, maybe not the purpose but she knows that it’s for the god of darkness, she also knows about the cult of light hunting them and one of the angel attacks, so she should know that they are beyond dialogue with the goddess of light. She must be able to also put two and two together with the attacks from high level players.
ch 38 Chapter 37: I Don’t Want To Be Alone
Action · PancakesWitch
Given that aria has already sown seeds of prophecy where Rimaru will pop up, I foresee her causing chaos somewhere else (enables author to add a ‘new’ continent or kingdoms), therefore using another ‘prophecy bs dau’ technique, warn of portals appearing and monster invasion, to sow some chaos. Also as you have already introduced Re:Zero, I think it would be a nice idea to add Rem and Ram, but using this world’s evolution line to create them, maybe have them as the ‘face’ of Aria’s monster invasion
ch 16 The Echidna who Flirts in a Walpurgis
Anime & Comics · SaintlyPervert
Is this supposed to read “as if”? As I don’t remember Auora marrying anyone else but Amadeus
After Aurora put Amia in her lap, she realized what she was doing, frowning, since this felt weird as she was Amia's wife now, but at the same time, she felt this was right, combined with the pleasurable feeling from her sensitive breasts and the funny feeling in her abdomen.
Fantasy · Reacix
It’s not her first time, as she did it with Amia in chapter 18
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Fantasy · Reacix
So let’s get this straight, super beta simp MC is now cucking himself by not giving Maya an ultimatum to leave Jin. He also screwed up by not temporarily taking her stamina recovery skill for himself during the act, to even or swing the playing field in his favour, and making an ultimatum more convincing. Also what is this level bs, dude has analysis complete and yet can’t see levels so far? Also he has killed 4 orcs which are supposedly too strong for his level, and yet he hasn’t levelled yet?
ch 12 Chapter 12. Angry Sister
Fantasy · kuru_patel
Who’s Ling Yu again?
ch 197 Mercenary King Returns to Country
Fantasy · starry8sword
Still reading, and enjoying this new volume
ch 81 The knight in grey and black armor and the deranged and sick girl he rescued
Fantasy · The_POZ
Lumina should be forgiven, but only after the MC observes her new Yandere personality (if kept in rewrite) and comes to terms that like he is different from other iterations, she is also, for this MC needs to mature more. Not fussed on the sucubus being a virgin, but MC is written like a prideful demon so having her sleep with others will go against his nature in my opinion so dream manipulation should be the way to go. Tactical battles plz, and half dwarf sister arc needs a rewrite, it felt way too forced
ch 0 -1 Questions For Rewrite
Fantasy · Lord_Asmodea
I don’t understand why the author says Yang Wei was isolated by the sect, when in reality he isolated himself. Day1 first lecture and enlightenment, day 2 mission hall and becomes elder jings medicine boy+herb study, day 3 recives qi sword technique and isolates himself to train for a week, day 9 hidden land announcement and 13 sword techniques training, day 10 sets off to hidden land and meets inner disciples displeased with 4th level qi realm joining them (which is understandable as compared to everyone else there he is beyond weak) but they never said anything.
ch 53 Meeting Up
Eastern · Idczhen
Author, Emilia is married to 15 wives not 14, since the last status update you keep missing out Fleur for some reason, (it’s mentioned they married during the 5 year timeskip) Also you need to tie up some loose ends before adding more to the family, like Herminone (would be 20-21 at this point so age is no longer a concern ) and Lea. It would also be great if you added her adopted children more to the family stuff, maybe a chapter on the relationship between her blood and adopted children, especially Hinata as she is probably around 10-12 when she was picked up from her multiverse.
ch 328 Rise Of 10,000 Vessels
Reality Bender System, Marvel
Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds