While I agree with LuciferHateia that constant plot armor can ruin a story I'm also glad you didn't let the sister die. Revenge as a primary motivation is so over done on this platform. While protection of loved ones is close behind, it allows for more variation. Assuming the sister will no longer be a weakling requiring baby sitting and the other sister probably ending up training under Rag. Still provides motivation to get much stronger while being far more interesting than simple revenge. Keep it up Mr. Author!
ch 48 SSS Interference
Fantasy · mrant12
Thanks for the chapter!
ch 148 Chapter 148- Forest Spring Spirits
Fantasy · ViciousPepper
Niella(Devour in Finnish based on the corrosive nature)
ch 102 Competition Across Generations
Fantasy · Awespec
Not even a single reference to Vault 22 from New Vegas. I'm disappointed Mr. Author!
ch 62 New Guardians Tournament (2)
Fantasy · Antihero
Everything was great for quite a long time. Very slow but not to an exaggerated extent and pretty comparable to similar novels in the genre. Novel sucked me in for quite a while.... However a certain event takes place in the mid 200s that for some reason absolutely ruined the entire novel for me. Even now I can't really point at why. After a single event all motivation to keep reading this novel went out the window. Can't really blame the author I guess. it's not even bad writing. It just completely pulled me out of the story.
This book has been deleted.
i get that this was supposed to be a "wake up and smell the roses" moment for the kids. At the same time I don't think the parents should have mentioned feeling bad about it. It's their job, it's part of why they are where they are, nothing to feel bad about. The beast would try and kill any human it came across so why feel bad for it when it wouldn't feel bad for you? I also think it's a little forced to have Jason break down due to sympathy with a beast. At least not this scenario.
ch 43 Grief and Agony
Urban · HideousGrain
Very good stuff Mr. Author. However I do wish there were a couple chapters of his training. Nothing crazy just some growth/bonding would have been nice. It's not really a negative to not have that just feels like a missed opportunity to show that Damion has some real determination.
ch 59 Departure: Beginning Of A New Adventure
My Pirate System
Fantasy · 1st_Manga_KING