Done :) It is a nice story with an intriguing twist :)
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Oh, stop grandmother
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Yes, "grandmother"
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Eyepatch and the guards
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He spotted a flesh of "black"..
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Oh, okay :)
"This drive you speak of, what is it gearing towards?" He walked away from the throne, towards a large window to the side. "Is it to our benefit? Or perhaps, he looked back at the throne, "There is something more to this merchant, he rolled his eyes, "than he lets on."
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and company around the dying embers of the fire
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"Rafael"
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welcome "party"
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"That"
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"I have all the answers."
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"Come with me"
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..I was careless"
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...and you my"
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"I thought of that too....
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"There is something more to the merchant' " '
"This drive you speak of, what is it gearing towards?" He walked away from the throne, towards a large window to the side. "Is it to our benefit? Or perhaps, he looked back at the throne, "There is something more to this merchant, he rolled his eyes, "than he lets on."
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"Is it for our benefit or perhaps " " "
"This drive you speak of, what is it gearing towards?" He walked away from the throne, towards a large window to the side. "Is it to our benefit? Or perhaps, he looked back at the throne, "There is something more to this merchant, he rolled his eyes, "than he lets on."
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Does TSOI have a name?
TSOI sighed, and when he spoke, the voice was deep. Filled with authority. "I sense a strong will. I sense his drive. A very deep hatred and vengeance so dark his soul drowns in it. I sense his sin. So much, it is as though; sin drips off him. However, I have no misgivings over him."
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Rafael and "company"
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I think it is better to name the Nations.
The reason for all this started a few years earlier when Nation U and Nation C were having a petty argument about " Who Gets to Be the Boss of the Federation ". Everybody started choosing their side, like children during this fight for supremacy; except for some neutral Nations.
Pursuit of Eternal
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