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Aww, and here I was hoping our poor MC finally found a normal girl.

"I should kill you here and now!" Lilly's voice had changed from serene, pleasing one to a menacing guttural growl that invoked fear in those who heard it.

My (Monster?) Hero Life

My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

yopop_
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No. Raven don't, you fool. You were supposed to hate not join her!

Sonja had come to a halt as she digested these words. 'He, wants to spend eternity with me?' Sonja was shaken to the core. This was something that she had never believed to ever be possible. Right now, she wanted nothing more than to hold this man and kiss him deeply. His confession had left her flustered. So much so that she would occasionally feel weak in her arms and end up banging her head on the wall.

My (Monster?) Hero Life

My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

yopop_
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Stockholm Syndrome: 100%

"Well, I had quite a bit of time to consider things while I was away. To be honest, after I calmed down, I realised that eternity wouldn't be so bad as long as I had you." There was a tinge of embarrassment to his voice as he continued to shuffle onwards.

My (Monster?) Hero Life

My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

yopop_
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Skills? My boi, the dude sealed all if your skills, what do you think getting more of em will do?

Now that he had gotten a glimpse of the kind of powerhouse that stood near the summit of his enemies power Kace knew that he still had so far to go. He would have to dedicate even more time to his training and gaining as many useful skills as possible. Otherwise, when the time came that he could not tuck tail and run a powerhouse like that one could wipe the floor with him for breakfast. 

My (Monster?) Hero Life

My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

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yopop_
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Hey Kace, there might be just a little chance that Grudga is a prisoner as well. I like the cold attitude but Grudga so far has been a pretty decent friend.

Two figures stepped out from the shadow's wriggling around on the ground. Kace stared at the crude stone throne that was right before him. His eyes flashed with anger at having been unable to finish the job. 'Why should I care about any of them? Even Grugda, despite what we've been through, never came to help me. Why should I allow any of them to live?'

My (Monster?) Hero Life

My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

yopop_
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Ah, The plants Grudga used. Thats my guess

'Vampires? Oh, ho. And here I thought I'd never get a chance to use 'that'! Just as well I bought it from the Headquarters supplies when I found out I'd be sent here.' A sinister smile crept across his face at this piece, of what he considered, good news...

My (Monster?) Hero Life

My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

yopop_
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Ah, but you see Sonja, Captain Raven hates you. Good for him. I hope he doesn't fall for her again, imagine the suffering such life would bring.

"Who else would it be for god's sake! Captain Raven, of course! Now that he has returned to me, I shall take him as my King." Sonja confidently declared.

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My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

yopop_
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Ah, well you see Sonja, Kace has decided to never fall for Sophia. Good for him.

"I said, we have to make sure to try and push my daughter and him closer together. It would be good for us if they were to form that sort of relationship."

My (Monster?) Hero Life

My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

yopop_
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Don't worry Celia, our boi only has 20 years left to live. 😢

Celia thought about the implications of what her queen had just told her. 'Does that mean that Kace has the potential to be stronger than Sonja? Surely that has to be a joke!' Celia hoped that this would not come to pass. It could shake up the very foundations of all they had worked for.

My (Monster?) Hero Life

My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

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yopop_
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Sonja can f right off, nothing she ever does after this gonna redeem her from the hated character list. (not saying the character is poorly written or anything like that)

Kace quickly put some distance between them, he was thrilled for the momentary respite that Sophia had just bought him. Sonja faced her child in the audience with a complicated look on her face. 'So, she noticed, huh? Despite that, she's choosing to protect his assets? He's even more of a threat than I thought he was.'

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My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

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yopop_
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"as they closed the distance"

The stories helped to pass the time and alleviate the boredom that they all felt. Kace studied the walls that were protecting the city within as closed the distance with the gate. 'Why does it look like it's just survived a major war?' Kace wondered.

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My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

yopop_
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"as they were marched" -> Either without "were" or change "marched" to marching

As they were marched along some of them shared stories with him about fighting alongside his ancestors years ago. They were greatly heartened to see that his race had not perished. More than one of them was only still alive today due to the feats of the Eljein during the war.

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My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

yopop_
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"we're spared" -> "were spared"

Only Raven and Sophia we're spared the experience due to their respective status. A few of the vampires realised which race Grugda belonged to when they moved to bind him. Although he was not spared the same fate, the soldiers treated him with respect.

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My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

yopop_
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"ill be in my way" -> "I'll be on my way"

Kace felt a little helpless standing by the side. Even though their conversation was about him, it was as though they were completely ignoring his existence. 'I have no interest in political power plays. Just give us a way home and whoever your pillar is and ill be in my way.' He thought while clicking his tongue.

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My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

yopop_
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"Hear and now" -> Here and now

Carl was seething. He had hoped to spark outrage hear and now so that he had an excuse to kill her so-called 'champion.' That way the risk of Sophia telling the truth could be negated before anyone could find out if it was or not.

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My (Monster?) Hero Life

Fantasy · Antihero

yopop_
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Poor Reed :(

He only had four worn silver coins to his name at the time. Hard-earned coin that he had diligently saved over the course of an entire year. All lost in a single day. Needless to say, his twelfth birthday had not gone as planned.

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