thank you for clarifying, I was also worried it was heading that direction
"I'll go," Dan gave his Wife a smile as he moved toward the door. "You might have been right, Revan's real goal was always the destruction of the hidden Sith Empire… even if we return all her memories now, she'll likely listen to reason if we show her what we can do."
Anime & Comics · VendakSoth
yeah, it shouldn't even be around yet at this point
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Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
Kazekage*
Gaara was also having fun, he didn't have many friends and since he was going to become the next Hokage people acted with way too much respect toward him so it was like a breath of fresh air to be around Naruto, who didn't care who you were or what position you held.
Anime & Comics · Washuru
I dont really feel like this is what Garou would do but i am interested to see where you take it.
ch 0 1 Death and a new world
Anime & Comics · RAAAHHHHH
no
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Anime & Comics · ILoveChaos
slower but better translations 100%
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Anime & Comics · Lazy_Ryuu
im not really liking the sisters but i'll see how it goes
ch 28 C28 Bad Mailman
Anime & Comics · FlammableFire
because we have to pay for the full chapters now
ch 304 303. Reversal
Others · DreAm_b0At
no problem
ch 115 Chapter 115
Anime & Comics · SomeSpookyGuy
you got this chapter and 114 flipped around
ch 115 Chapter 115
Anime & Comics · SomeSpookyGuy
this brings me so much joy
Q1: Do you like this fanfic?
Anime & Comics · BooboboBoa
I like that he does whatever he wants but I wouldn't be opposed to him being evil either.
Q6: I have two separate plot lines planned out. One where the MC starts getting corrupted and becomes an evil being at the same level as Sukuna, and one where he does whatever the fuck he wants whether it be f*cking the plot or killing characters. Additionally, if you guys want, I can make him like Itadori Yuuji. Which one do you guys like?
Anime & Comics · BooboboBoa
I've enjoyed it so far.
Q5: Is my writing style good? I feel like I put too much effort into either dialogue or thoughts but not into actions or the world. What do you guys think I should improve or stop doing?
Anime & Comics · BooboboBoa
sounded fine to me
Q4: Is the info I wrote about curses, sorcerers, techniques, etc. fine? I did alter the world a bit because I couldn't think of a good way to give the MC stuff. For example, I added the clan library, but it also seemed like a logical idea.
Anime & Comics · BooboboBoa
it'd be Hiruzen's office right now
I dispose Corpses In Konoha
Anime & Comics · harsh07