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The writing mode is interesting I have already read another icaro fanfic in fate luckily and great work by the writer-san they don't look alike I am intrigued by the magic that the protagonist can develop considering the legend of icaro and the lore of fate I am excited hehe

the mc is entertaining to read and the characters have personality mc's "hack" is useful and is not op, at least for now, the writing quality is of good quality even translating it with google-cha horario de actualizaciones razonable 😘😘

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That is because at least as far as I was able to interpret in Naruto, the shinobi clans were clans because you had a characteristic technique or element. The only clan in which this is not seen is in the Sarutobi clan. Anyway, the story is still interesting. ps: until now and considering the talent of the protagonist, I think he should dabble in illusions

caught my attention until now the protagonist is not a son of heaven or anything like that, he has things in which he stands out and others in which he does not, which I see as logical and makes me curious as to how the story will develop I also want to see what is special about your clan and what it can offer you in addition to its elemental affinities. there are a lot of them that are never used

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Ves se traduce mal :"^

don't know English, it's all the fault of the translator xd ps: this is a restructuring right? because I made comments about giving stiles powers or that in the end mc doesn't have a significant relationship with Malia and I didn't read that anywhere and wtf

I like how the story is developed, the author gives it a touch and even though not everyone likes it, it is entertaining to read I hope this teen wolf ff continues and doesn't end up halfway like others the quality of writing is not bad but it is not great either, although that is explained by the fact that English is not her first language and the lack of experience, both are fixed and/or improve with time or practice

I love it the character development and story progression is great the world is well thought out and the power system is concise and realistic 10 out of 10 Liiza team forever ♡♡♡