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My own story isn’t important. I like to hear all the others.

2019-04-11 Joined United States

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You’re supposed to hate Rachel in ToG. She’s part of the character’s development, and his obsession makes sense since in his eyes she saved his life and gave him a purpose to live. In some twisted and frustrating turn of fate, that obsession was the only thing strong enough to draw him into the Tower, and the only motivation he could fathom to keep moving on in the beginning. As the story goes on, his reasons to continue shift and grow, and his faith in Sarah shifts, evolving into more of a desire to understand. In this story, however, I get the vibe so far that Aine is part of whatever attempts were made to prepare for this catastrophe; her and the MC alike. She probably has ties to important people in the Empire, and much like the MC she probably has had things done to her body to leave her better off in this apocalypse. That said, where the MC seems to be left in the dark about why or how he is the way he is (presumably because whatever was done to him was either extremely experimental, or illegal), she seems to be much more aware. Enough so that it has given her distinct advantages over the others, and left her rather numb to everything that’s happened. Like in this chapter, for example, she’s clearly using the MCs strength to get a 2-man clear on an 8-man dimension so she can get the high-tier rewards after hearing him say he can solo-clear. Talk about manipulative. But intelligent, I guess. Her friends seem like they probably know what’s going on too, just from the way they interact. At least the one that always speaks for her. I wouldn’t say its the most original plot, but it does seem like it might evolve rather pleasantly as things unfold. Hopefully the face-slapping maintains a minimum, but I see a lot of potential for character development and intriguing world-building.

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