Aditya_Kumar - Profile

Where are the new chapters?

why stop the updates?

Will you continue this story in the near future?

Good.

Love the plot twist.

Best Ben 10 fanfic i have read in a while. one of the best.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Good work. keep it up.

It feels like you are just telling what Ano is doing. Can't connect with characters at all. You are finishing a chapter wherever you like. There should at least be a frame which should be completed in a chapter. You can use less words to describe the frame but leaving readers with incomplete events for a while make us uninterested. More so that you are a author which can't even write properly in English. The authors who can't write well compensate with faster updates to get readers attention. And please use a check and correct apps like grammarly to write if you can't write well in English.

the story is deteriorating.

the story is progressing too slowly. take longer to make chapters longer if you need to.

change "... that it was a reflex." to "... it was self defence."

Longer chapters or frequent updates

I will give you all my stones if you up your upload frequency.