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You introduce him as a Cold trained machine like mercenary with serious ptsd most likely yet after one brief conversation he's catching feelings and blushing it just seems abit odd tbh

I've read all of your current stories with this one being my favourite so far if I could suggest anything it would be nice to see harry learning more "darker" or powerful spells considering most fanfics just go with the basic transfiguration or charms It hasn't shown how dark he's willing to be so far so I doubt the unforgivables or like bone boiling are in the future unfortunately perhaps big elemental spells similar to fiendfyre or perhaps a original water/lightning variation i suppose its dependent on how strong you wanna make him

Obviously I could be completely wrong and please let me know

Praying to God he doesn't go dragons I swear 95% of every yugioh gx fic they use dragons please there are hundreds of cooler archetypes

Thanks for the chapter

Apparently the Caladrius is associated with healing in mythology but I doubt exists in the hp universe

Unless you have some specific reason or a future plot point wouldn't a creature more leaning towards healing be better suited for his wand? such as phoenix or unicorn? not that the core actually changes much in the story at all just a question

I feel like Tiona and Tione would match well with his shaman/hunter primal aesthetic considering they are amazons no?

I would assume if there was a love interest it would be esdeath as she most likely matches him the most. I also assume he won't prostitute his woman/lover right just the slaves he picks up otherwise that's a put off for sure

Let me clarify that I'm just up to chapter 2 and it was mostly a rant on these types of stories not this one in particular as I haven't seen enough to see which kinda direction this one will go

abit odd calling it za warudo instead of The World

the soul spilting/clone option has a chance to be rejected and called ntr while the time stop and harem world have 0 chance i personally think the harem world one is the best but all 3 options are fine soul spilting being way superior to clone

Thanks for the chapter keep up the great work

Its incredibly good so far and the only issue it has for me atleast is that the mc feels incredibly weak and has done basically nothing about it except that gym part and grabbing the sniper. Also he seems to be abit of a coward constantly getting frightened and kinda getting pushed around but that might just be my misconception thanks for the chapters and I hope the relationship between sky and mc grows more