glad you are back, your story is great and a lot of people want to read and support your story
ch 112 112 - Surprise Event
Movies · NunuXD
then go sat on enel's lap[img=recommend]
In a move that shocked both Enel and the rest of her crewmates, she sat directly in Enel's lap and started reading one of her old books.
Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
just read this novel, this is so good, please don't drop this
ch 24 Chapter 24
Anime & Comics · Arokey
it's not necessary, it would be pretty bad if you decided to make a whole chapter for a side character backstory, even this is make me think it's useless to make this long
[A/N: I was initially planning to summarize this flashback in a single para without much detail, but I wanted to see how it'll be if I decided to show his backstory instead of just telling it in a single para. Would like to hear your feedback on this. In the future, would you prefer I expand certain summaries in this way, or would you prefer if I just summarized it in 1-2 paragraphs and moved on with the story? Lemme know.]
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
Your story is great but I noticed that it looks like you have some consistent grammar errors like... 1. There = Their 2. Emmidiently = immediately 3. Incrediable = Incredible It's very noticeable that I think you are doing it intentionally. It's not a big problem because I still can understand what you mean, but it's a little unpleasant in my eyes. If you have a problem with grammar, you can use ChatGPT to help you correct it or at least ask it to show the grammar errors in your text. I don't want to be a grammar Nazi, but at least fix those three grammar errors in your ff. No hard feelings, bro.
MHA Quirk: Calling Critters
Anime & Comics · Jingle303