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that would be too much, also unecesary, prsonally i think the author should only add eve, since she is the best girl there

No need to add that world, just add eve and put her in the main harem

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Thx dude, i remember you for the Zagreus chapter, did you come back to that novel? :)

finally someone that thinks the same, wouldnt be weird seeing mc intaracting with this super tall people with giant heads and eyes? its ok if its from anime to anime but a cartoon western animation fits more with other animations like the dc or marvel ones you are talking about

well really loved the chapter and concept, can't wait to see the next one, and the girls reacting to seeing mc in real life

nice, love the waves mc is making

Noo, it would lose the point of having the nemetrix, first of all adding an anime world to a western cartoon style would be hard to imagine them interacting or more like weird, but excluding that. What is stopping mc to add a lot of powers in his human form and don't have the need to transform, he would have too many powers to even think what to use and when. its better if he focus on improving and controlling his already big list of powers than stockpiling powers mindlessly, like bruce lee said:"I fear not the man who has practiced 10,000 kicks once, but I fear the man who has practiced one kick 10,000 times.''

Epic chap bro, wonder what is the next adventure, although personally before going to another universe i rather see mc and rick explore their own multiverse, see mc flex his might to other mortys, Hey bro can i ask you to add Eve from Summer time saga?

That's my whole idea, my plan is that Mark replace Zach Thompson, getting the Tech jacket and helping the geldarians, eventually he will meet princess Lin and add her to the harem since Mark can have seggs with any alien species, so there won't be any Open relationship for them, once princess Lin is dating Mark can ask her to give a Gelderland suit to all his girlfriends, giving them eternal youth making Mark and his harem live forever

Honestly i dont know who was the one asking for seggs so soon, i mean charmcaster didn't showed up yet, not to mention you decided not to add drew, so i honestly don't know the reason behind adding kim just to have a one night stand with her, sure it's good to see how people react to MC and Ben's adventures and see how they impact this world, but aside from that i don't understand why this happened, Anyway just make sure Kim is pleased because she can demand mc for R*pe and ruin his reputation, just try to avoid that maybe give her some tech or super soldier serum to compensate her

I just hope MC doesn't get blamed here, i mean mc and Nolan's reputation should be better here, After all Nolan didn't killed any innocent and confessed in public, hope mc's reputation gets better here than og

i dont have problems with filer chaps, its just that i hate the elegant/dramatic way the chat writes then, i rather a technical chapter about the car's stats and mcs thoughts than this

Thanks that's personally the only problem I had with this ChatGPT chapters, it was more entertaining when the chapters were filled with Morty's inner thoughts of his plans to either have adventures or seduce girls, replacing that with 3rd elegant point of view was a huge turn-off for me. Just want to come back to what the chapters used to be.

:I Can you please just remove the dramatic /elegant words? I'm not asking to not use ChatGPT, just alter the final result so it looks like a normal text, shouldn't be so hard to do.

sighhh why you keep abusing of ChatGPT? Seriously bro we don't want to see all this fancy and overdramatic narration, just write normally, or at least do half of that and eliminate all the elegant/dramatic nonsense of the ChatGPT and leave the rest, is that so hard for you??

nice, although i want to see more of the new world and their reaction to MC, specially once they found out of MC' castle

nooo no xd merge worlds it's too extreme, mainly because scott vs the world and cyberpunk are too different, so no world fusion please xd, really its not needed the word fusion with mcs travel, what you can do is to take the tech from cyberpunk and use it on mc and his close people, maybe use it for his own league to boost them in their world travels

Also in Cyberpunk mc can save the edgerunner cast from adam smasher, sure mc is god in the world but that doesnt mean it would be less interesting or that he cant gain stuff form there, he can get some tech of cyberpunk and use it on his home

First chapter that i don't have too many things to comment, well its normal since the world is black cover, personally if it wasn't for the grimoire and the quest i wouldn't see point to come back, i would recommend you to ignore that world, doesn't worth the time, he got what he wanted. a better world for mc would be Cyberpunk either be edge runner or the video game one, maybe both, its a fun world to travel, mc can upgrade his tech skills and alchemy skills, also it would be epic to see night city react to mc's magic, also it would be fun for mc's friends and ramona to go there and they can get some gear for themselves, once mc upgrade them and made it safe