Webnovel Author: Absolute_Zer0 - Fanfic Collection

MC had gamer's body? I didn't notice that. Anyway if you are making him train not just dump stat point then you can make him manipulate his own temprature(of course carefully) to make him resistant to temprature change(he has dragon blood so his body can take more punishment). You can even throw some breathing technique here since according to Iroh fire bending is all about breath(at least on physical side). And MC can develop move like Superman's super flare(expelling large amount of fire from his body in one go). And replicate combustion bending by firing concentrated bullet of chi. You can even turn him into literal living star in later stages by making him turn his chi into not just fire but solar radiation.

Fire is element of strength so maybe user may be able to heal by manipulating 'vigor/vitality/chi' of body. Maybe making it so it takes great deal of stamina of target. You can even make cultivation BS with this just throw some requirment of physical strain on it.

Yes! I wouldn't even complained if it was some BS healing technique. But forming fist of fire just didn't make sense

In my opinion that blazing fist move made no sense in ATLA universe. If it was some western fantsy world it would make sense but it was ATLA, bending is completely different from magic system that has such spell/technique/skills. Chi itself fuels bending, in other word if you used fire bending you are burning chi, which gives no possibly of solidifying fire itself by manipulating chi, since it is burnt, there is no chi in resulting fire, thus it is exactly same as natural fire.

Everyone is mahou shoujo at one point, no matter the gender.

Oh, young one, who has not been enlightened to power of magical girls. What will those characters do against someone who can rewrite reality at their will? Some magical girls are even conceptual beings. Well, Saitama maybe but i'm not sure about other two.

Of course mahou shoujo is ultimate! Majority of most powerful characters are Mahou Shoujo after all.

NOOOO! You can't! It was so cute! I liked this.

So much cringe! I literally dying!

Makes sense considering Reo regained his power thus rendering infinity stones powerless.

Shut up and give me chapter! You are still doing better than certain troll with Z in his name, so no need to be concerned about some useless trolls.

I forgot the name but I remember reading it on this site. Author was chinese dude(obviously). God, it was unbearable, Genin fodders trash talking before fight, Daimyo Young Master acting arrogant.

Ah, I was afraid this will turn into some nonsense with ninjas riding flying sword, over top technique name screaming, Young master face slapping. And please do clarify in the future and just increasing internal energy without backlash is kinda off putting tho.

I said many times before. Chakra is internal, personal energy without senjutsu. That's why cultivating(at least by absorbing foreign energy) and chakra can't be in same sentence, because that would become senjutsu which doesn't function like cultivation. Chakra itself changes its nature when it comes into contact with nature energy and it is not permanent by any means.

Just spend his oh-so-precious time to take a look at my comments before I was irritated. And read that you mentioning about 'making use of all quirks' in last AUX chapter. And to be frank, I'm not impressed as I know too well you will forged more than half of them in next chapter. Those quirks are so random and inconsistent your MC will never even use some of them. And with adaptive body some of them will even become unnecessary.

Just take it slow. You can extend what you narrated in few chapters into full blown pre-canon arc that shows how he interacts with child Rumi which inevitably make MC perceive Rumi as child/little girl, then maybe add some drama that forces MC to change that percpective and then finally start romantic relationship. And there is no need to make everything perfect, perfection itself is flawed because it means stagnance. So maybe start things slowly. It would have been better if MC just born in MHA with basic of basic cultivation technique that evolves with him. And he slowly grows up in world. Maybe as quirkless orphan? Cultivating energy in order to not starve, fighting for survival in street eventually finding his way to acquire education and shelter. And make him cultivate energy(as you should have called in the first place since energy he cultivating(profound energy since you are using ATG) isn't have spiritual in nature). You just took away all conflict, all suspence, all anticipation by making him god from right off bat, which may be cause of his detached state. Even Rumi should have noticed MC was not looking at her, he was looking at "Rabbit Hero: Mirko" fictional character.

I still feel MC is too, I don't know, fake? Yeah that's the word. And he seems to doesn't really fit in with his current reality, still thinking it as fictional, as it can be seen from fact he is nkt interacting with society even though he already changed enough to make it doubtful to even Midoriya to inherit OFA just interacting with Shimura Nana. And MC's personality is like that of robot. Rigid and we didn't see him interacting with anyone. Altough I understand Author wants to rush to canon but I just can't invest in him as character, or any of character of this fic. All of them are rigid and one dimensional, I will feel nothing even if Rumi was r@ped, MC was c¥cked and killed.

I know. But you can just, I don't know, not describe it? It becomes real annoying after first time.

Can you please do something about 'beauty' of you MC? It is really annoying girls blushing left, right with nothing but appearance? It makes it seem like characters are shallow, will leave MC if there is someone more beuatiful. I as my momma dearest thaught me genuinely disdains such characters.

Why not use Divine Spirit? Phantasmal Lords are effectively evolution of spiritual entities and primarily uses spirit energy anyway. So it makes sense if we are following trend.