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Why is the entire start of the novel just a bunch of exposition Completely and utterly unreadable Imagine if an actual novel like lord of the rings just dumped all of its lore at the start of the novel. no one would ever read it

I regret reading this. I know the quality on this site is abysmal but please do not simply publish a rough draft as the final product. I have no idea what I am even reading anymore. Every single plot point that gets introduced is then summarily ignored so that the weird slice of life story continues on. Its like watching one show on TV and then it suddenly cuts to a different one for a moment before eventually going back to the original. If you were wondering why people stopped reading a previous work, if it was structured like this one I can tell why. Sure its good at the start because you are just working with one major plot device but as you add ore and more the dysfunction shows itself. Its actually kinda amazing how the plot point of megawomans body was actually dragged out for hundreds of chapters. Even more amazing when every single plot point is also ignored until its randomly brought up again later.