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Love the story so far don't be afraid to make an original more expansive universe ,there are many forces in the galaxy that can make the story more interesting than just the forces on earth. There are many olaces you can take the story ,whether its just plain power leveling or kingdom building it has alot of potential ...

Isn't this just a copy of the naruto revolution fanfic?

This is a copy if a fanfic named revolution ...are you the original author,or just a fan?

Love the novel keep up the good work .

It's good ...having the daedric prince retaliate would be a good move storywise ...also start fleshing out your world or you'll be confined to the small locations the readers already knows about...keep up the good work.

Stop doing art if I wanted to look at images I would have scrolled through pinterest

Another route for power development would be using basic science and using the fact that as mass approaches the speed light it basically momentarily has infinite force .overcoming might and power levels with a little science ...destruction energy could destroy the force produces by this ....

give yourself the time to write and when you focus on something that is not intended penalise yourself ,pain or something foul but non life threatening will work.in time you'll train yourself to do these things on command or you'll have to up the penalty since you've adapted already

The future is closer then it seems

Start a go fund me for fallout 3 las vegas and then fallout 4 ...if one of you viewers loves and donates you can improve world building ...Love uout content be safe during these trying times people

please i just need a hit bro ......please ...just kidding,good novel and one that makes sense regarding growth you have to work for power otherwise the power will never be your own ....you can ignore me but here are some ideas +spirit bones evolve as you fight in later chapters(not to op but scales as time goes on) +if you time skip do it in meaningfull ways that show mc character growth ..thats about it love the novel and can't wait for a new chapter

screw the haters and but your vision to paper and know that for every asshole out there their is also somebody who reads your work and for those few minutes gets to enjoy themselves so keep up the good work