Love the story so far don't be afraid to make an original more expansive universe ,there are many forces in the galaxy that can make the story more interesting than just the forces on earth. There are many olaces you can take the story ,whether its just plain power leveling or kingdom building it has alot of potential ...
ch 46 Announcement
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
Isn't this just a copy of the naruto revolution fanfic?
ch 61 Naruto : Domination: Chapter 61
Anime & Comics · sybife
This is a copy if a fanfic named revolution ...are you the original author,or just a fan?
ch 45 Naruto : Domination: Chapter 45
Anime & Comics · sybife
Love the novel keep up the good work .
ch 160 Chapter XXIII: Lock And Key
Video Games · Rastislav
It's good ...having the daedric prince retaliate would be a good move storywise ...also start fleshing out your world or you'll be confined to the small locations the readers already knows about...keep up the good work.
ch 120 Chapter LXI: Impotent Rage
Video Games · Rastislav
Stop doing art if I wanted to look at images I would have scrolled through pinterest
ch 39 Okay guys, this is art art, it's actually well done this time in dbz style, I redrew quandales art piece a couple minutes ago
Anime & Comics · Aaron_Chong_6689
Another route for power development would be using basic science and using the fact that as mass approaches the speed light it basically momentarily has infinite force .overcoming might and power levels with a little science ...destruction energy could destroy the force produces by this ....
ch 37 No chapter today, but you get art instead, check comment section
Anime & Comics · Aaron_Chong_6689
A training arc then return of Natsu and the gang.
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give yourself the time to write and when you focus on something that is not intended penalise yourself ,pain or something foul but non life threatening will work.in time you'll train yourself to do these things on command or you'll have to up the penalty since you've adapted already
ch 358 Back-And-Forth
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
The future is closer then it seems
never give up you are important we love your work and the soul that is in your writing ..find what makes you happy and pursue it until the end that is life ...talk to us in those dark days so we may shoulder some of your worries and cheer you up ..you are not alone ,you are loved ,you are adored
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please i just need a hit bro ......please ...just kidding,good novel and one that makes sense regarding growth you have to work for power otherwise the power will never be your own ....you can ignore me but here are some ideas +spirit bones evolve as you fight in later chapters(not to op but scales as time goes on) +if you time skip do it in meaningfull ways that show mc character growth ..thats about it love the novel and can't wait for a new chapter
ch 35 Chapter 17 Martial Spirit Evolution, Profound Iron Staff 2/2
Book&Literature · DivinDragonEmperor
be strong bud and get well soon ,
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Anime & Comics · Otaku_king
Chat gpt
ch 0 2 Chapter 2 Prologue
Halo Reborn
Video Games · Dr_Dred