hi i just finished reading your hxh fanfic it was really good and i hope you don't drop it :(
ch 14 Lands of rivers (4)
Anime & Comics · Eggcellent
Lotm: Tarot Club's Vibes ... Nice
ch 35 Hidden Heaven Sect
Eastern · Dark_Crow1111
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 A Man at the Edge
Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
so far too many sentences in 1 dialogue. it's like a person who says many things in 1 breath. I think the author can cover it with inner conversation (monologue) and can also explain things through other ways besides conversation.
ch 58 Ivor's Aspirations
Fantasy · Grayback
I mean there are countless players there. and also every day on the forum there will be thousands to tens of thousands of posts per time. And what do I mean by coincidence? Everyone who has become Mc's enemy has seen the posts on the forums where there are a lot of posts there. this is not just 1 person but more than 1 person what if this is not a coincidence (?). of course posts can be listed in status (Hot / trending) so that many people can see. but at that time he was not very famous and from the many posts they could find him all at once. what is the probability of this happening in the real world? this is why i say "coincidence"
ch 17 Wraithless.
Games · Alekzi
moby should really learn a lesson from this incident. 1. he should have done a quick and clean kill. only compromise if his strength is above the enemy.2 he should not be so transparent to his subordinates including jayden, as a leader he should keep his abilities a secret so that when an incident like abby happens, the enemy doesn't get much information. I hope Moby learns a lot from this incident
ch 239 Rising From The Ashes
Fantasy · Drip
all these coincidences.. for god's sake this is ridiculous lol
ch 17 Wraithless.
Games · Alekzi
this is really good, has really amazing potential, you know hxh's original work probably won't reach the end (because of the mangaka's condition) so this becomes another way to satisfy the desires of us hxh fans. I love really love this bro good job!. btw why did you stop updating this story?
Hunter x Hunter : Dictator
Anime & Comics · Eggcellent