Wonkey

Wonkey

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A hobby writer and a student.

2019-04-27 Joined United States
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Wonkey
Wonkey
4 years ago
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I think I worded it a bit wrong, It's not that thick of a paragraph but it feels thick. There are a lot of commas that extend some sentences unessisarily.

Wonkey
Wonkey
4 years ago
Posted

This is a beautiful novel. Not in the sense that it's fairytales and rainbows but in how well it brings the characters to life. The trauma and the tragedy feel so real and give's it another level of depth. Very well done!

Wonkey
Wonkey
4 years ago
Posted

This novel is really good! It has an interesting MC and a plot that has a lot of potential. There's not much I can say besides it being a really well-written and well-paced story!

Wonkey
Wonkey
4 years ago
Posted

It's a pretty fun read, no major issues but the paragraphs are really thick. The characters also sometimes feel off but not downright bad. Overall this is a pretty good read with good quality writing!

Wonkey
Wonkey
4 years ago
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Gidderon not Giddeon!

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Wonkey
Wonkey
4 years ago
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My biggest issue with this story is the grammar, spacing and such. The review by Giddeon basica say all. But this story is very charming, I can see the type of story this is going to be and if its quality gets better then we have a very good fantasy adventure!

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Wonkey
Wonkey
4 years ago
Posted

While vampire stories are not my favorite or even prefered genre, the story is quite good and very intriguing. There are some small granmar issues and the dialogue sometimes feels forced and unnatural. But its nothing granmarly cant fix. The flow of the story is really good and I can already imagine the epic adventure about to happen!

  • Reborn In A Cursed world original

    Reborn In A Cursed world

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION MYSTERY DARK SUPERPOWERS TRAGEDY GENIUS

    The world is infected with a curse of unknown origin. The curse infects people, animals, and plants. All cursed show increased growth and strength but at any moment can change into monsters that feed on any and all life. Collin T. Merian, a cursed who had been fighting for his rights and freedom, has died. He wakes up as a baby but the world is different. People with weird symbols have powers that defy logic. With nothing he can do, he decides to just live his life, and try to figure out if he is on earth or somewhere else, and how this happened to him. But this world is a lot more dangerous then he expects. I do not own this artwork. If you do and you would like me to remove it please let me know. I found the artwork on this site: https://finalfantasy.fandom.com/wiki/Crystal_(term)

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