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I think I've read more light novels than I have braincells. * Mr_Whimsy (old name)

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Moments 2002

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I mean this in the kindest way, if you're going to weaken the metamorphmagus just don't bother. A reasonably skilled witch/wizard using Transfiguration could accomplish the same thing. Thanks for the chapter.

As Harry experimented with his newfound abilities, he discovered a partial Metamorphmagus talent, inherited from his Black great-grandmother. The ability to alter his appearance, though limited to just the face, was a remarkable gift.

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

Book&Literature · TalesByJaz

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Isn't a "wand-shaped cut" just a vertical line? Thanks for the chapter.

The wand-shaped cut could be seen as Voldemort marking Charles as his equal for the final confrontation in the future. 

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

Book&Literature · TalesByJaz

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Good to see an update on this story. And to give my opinion, it depends on how it looks . Thanks for the chapter.

Be honest, which is cooler? Sending lightning from your fingertips, or swinging bolts of lighting from your blade?

The Reincarnator's Tavern

The Reincarnator's Tavern

Movies · GnomeBob

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"despite intent being a major factor", did you miss this part of the comment? Whilst not as in-detail as your comment, it should at least have conveyed that I understood how important intent is for spell casting. Saying that, why did you respond with a comment explaining the intents needed for the Unforgivables?

This was because apparition worked based on the concept of spatial tunneling that involved creating a small tube of magic that flung the wizard from one spot to another based on the coordinates they set. Normally this process would take a period of time to make calculations but thanks to the nature of magic that wasn't necessary so long as the rules of apparition were followed. See magic as a whole had this funny property of remembering spells so that the next time they are used even if it is by a complete idiot they only need the words and wand movements to succeed if there is no intent in the spell.-

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Book&Literature · loskro

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Did you give that response, using example, to assist readers in better understanding the Unforgivables, or for a different reason?

This was because apparition worked based on the concept of spatial tunneling that involved creating a small tube of magic that flung the wizard from one spot to another based on the coordinates they set. Normally this process would take a period of time to make calculations but thanks to the nature of magic that wasn't necessary so long as the rules of apparition were followed. See magic as a whole had this funny property of remembering spells so that the next time they are used even if it is by a complete idiot they only need the words and wand movements to succeed if there is no intent in the spell.-

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Book&Literature · loskro

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Not going to copy the Dovazhul on the Word Wall? Thanks for the chapter.

I toss her a bag of about 500 septims "That should be your cut without all the processing costs, consider it a welcoming gift." I offer flippantly.

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

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What about their capabilities when it comes to Healing Undead spells? is that considered in the "practically nonexistent" category? Thanks for the chapter.

"Indeed" I hum and resume my lesson "They have an affinity for cryomancy, necromancy, and hemomancy while having a low affinity for fire and even being vulnerable to pyromancy, their affinity for restoration of any kind is practically non-existent. They are physically stronger than non-vampires, faster than us, and have a high healing factor which depends on their blood satiety, speaking of blood satiety the hungrier they are the more feral they become. In conclusion, you should either burn them with fire, scorch them with sunlight, or strike them down with silver weapons, preferably by way of stabbing."

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

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Parseltongue is a language to "Charm" snakes with intelligence, like what Charm spells do? Cool. Thanks for the chapter.

It wasn't until he arrived that Harry regretted not focusing on Parseltongue a bit more. With how things have been hectic the previous year, it had just slipped his mind. And it wasn't like he could have done much about it anyway. As he had discovered previously, Parseltongue was a form of soul projection targeted towards snakes, imbuing them with a temporary boost of intelligence. Learning the entire dictionary would have taken thousands of hours of logging each word and trying to copy how the soul was projected.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

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define what you mean by a "bit too technical". thanks for the chapter.

Anyway, this one became a bit too technical, I know. Getting lost in the details is the whole thing that I do. Please let me know if you have any ideas about the future of this book. I'm looking forward to your comments.

Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin

Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin

Book&Literature · DreamyApe

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How in-depth does the potion work in this fanfic? Is it down to the genetic level? Or purely just appearances. Thanks for the chapter.

"Mark me now with thine own ears and witness this solemn vow I inscribe," Pettigrew began, with Ron Weasley's voice taking on an uncharacteristic gravity, "Hearken unto my oath, scribed in blood and sealed by magic most binding."

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

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Author, you spend too much time taking the magic away from Magic. Thanks for the chapter.

Anyway, the artifact created an independent physical projection creating the illusion of time travel and rejoining each other with their memories seamlessly when it is used in the future. It was a dirty trick, but it seemed to work. There were many holes in that theory, probably ones that the researcher who probably became an Unspeakable, fixed decades back. Without any access to the sand, there was nothing Harry could do anyway.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

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Don't give his the original "cheats" of Huo, but make up your own. Thanks for the chapter.

Leaving that aside, do you guys think I should give the Skydream Ice Worm as the MC's first soul ring? Please give me your opinions.

Douluo Dalu 2: Legend of the Ice and Fire Douluo

Douluo Dalu 2: Legend of the Ice and Fire Douluo

Anime & Comics · iLyannn

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* her adoptive -> his adoptive

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* her adoptive -> his adoptive (only applies if "Yu Haochen" is male)

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* her adoptive -> his adoptive

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Instead of smallest you can use pettiest. Petty (pettiest) meaning: of little importance; trivial.

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* Her shoulder-length -> His shoulder-length

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