Manjuan

Manjuan

8mth

Posted

Decent start and then trash afterwards.

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Urban · The Suckling Pig

Manjuan

1yr

Posted

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Eastern · Flying Fatty

Manjuan

2yr

Posted

Another trash to remove. 😒🤢🤮 ...................... . .. ..... . .... ...... ... ... . .. .... ....... ................ ...

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Sci-fi · The Sky Wishes to Clear Up

Manjuan

2yr

Posted

Meh............................................................................................................................. The numbers speak for themselves.

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Fantasy · Ultimate Guaiguaipi

Manjuan

2yr

Posted

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Eastern · God_Is_With_Me

Manjuan

2yr

Commented

So... the count got burnt to ashes AFTER he agreed. Weird how grammer works and why some readers are sensitive about it.

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No explanation for anything. I don't know if the Mc is idiotic or if the author skips over everything. No worldbuilding. Bland characters. Everything the author says is a contradiction. A lvl 50 assassin(cause there's no explaining and the highest lvl NCP is under lvl 100) can dodge and run away from a lvl 200 elite monster. Really coherent.

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Games · Hong Chen Qian Zhang

Manjuan

2yr

Posted

Regular dream-fulfillment Chinese novel. If it's your cup of tea, then go ahead. ...................................................................................

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Eastern · Financial Overlord

Manjuan

3yr

Commented

"While the Outer Disciples are also hardly seen because" and "according to what Qin Yi had heard" are both dependent clauses while the last part of the sentence is an independent clause. Suggestion: "[T]he Outer Disciples are also hardly seen because, according to what Qin Yi had heard, [t]he Outer Disciples Tournament is about to begin. Or: "[A]ccording to what Qin Yi had heard, the Outer Disciples are hardly seen because [t]he Outer Disciples Tournament is about to begin

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Eastern · Mysterious_Pen

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I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE

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